Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this faith-filled verse with us during the Christmas season. As we head into a new year, may the Lord bless you with peace and love.

All the best,

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review and God bless you and your family, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

I wonder if you're really addressing God, as the prompt dictates?
Seems to me, you're parroting God and/or the Bible.
Seems to me you're addressing mankind. Just a thought.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

A reminder of things I and all may want to remember and improve on for the New year

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written contest entry for the writing prompt. I enjoyed reading your prayer for forgiveness for failures and sins and for all to improve in 2019. So hard it is just about here too! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review
God Bless you and your family 🙏🏽

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This was a great story, but i'm not sure if it's in a letter format. It showed a lot of research into the seven deadly sins. I found a couple of editing things you need to tidy up:
1.I think you misspelled perfect.
2.Should their be a period behind decisions, you capitalized repentance.
3. Don't married women have wrongdoings too?
4. Isn't it supposed to be who's?
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review #3 probably should be mankind
All points are Greatly appreciated
Blessings to you and your family

Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

Good job. "And return God's spirit untarnished 'twas their perfect goal"
This is a nice line acknowledging that life comes from God and returns to Him. You did a good job going from there listing the seven deadly sins , ending with the call to pray for the fruits of the spirit which are opposite of sin. In my opinion you have written this prose in a way that keeps a poetic value to it. I think it could be called prose-poetry. Beautifully done.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review and insight. I am still learning poetry types,
Very helpful insight.
God Bless you and your family