Comment from ioana.u

Exceptional

Six stars for that crazy imagination! It was so funny and inspired!
"No one flattens like Iron Man." - I loved that part!
Good luck in the contest, it is a great entry!
Ioana

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019

Thanks, ioana, for the great review. Bill

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this is very good, I thought you were going to parody 'Black Sabbath's' "Iron Man. couldn't really see that working out too well. good luck in the contest..

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019

Thanks, meeshu

Comment from Carola Fernandez

Excellent

Great song parody! Very clever...I had a lot of fun reading it. It left me with a big smile. Keep up with your creativity. Best of luck with your entry!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019

Thank you, Carola.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I knew what song you were parodying even before I read your notes. I'm actually old enough to have watched the Spiderman cartoon on Saturday mornings. This is by far the best song parody entry I've read. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019

Thanks, Earl.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Okay, this was funny. Seems it defines Iron Man spot on as well. While I was reading this, the tune of "Spider Man" kept running through my head. Well done!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019

Thanks, Brett

Comment from Sam Saylor

Excellent

this made me chuckle and its even funnier because you took a superhero song and then parodied it using another superhero and it was actually about a clothing iron. Sorry i'm simply stating the obvious but it was funny and read well.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019

Thanks, Sam.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh my goodness! Iron Man just might be my new favorite song. :))"Could he hang from a thread? No, he drops like lead." HAHAHAHA! "Presses shirts, any size; pleats your skirts, not your ties..." Too funny!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019

Thanks, Dawn

reply by Dawn Munro on 11-Jan-2019

You're very welcome. :)

Comment from babykoala

Excellent

Brilliant! I love how you have replaced one marvel character with another and cha bed the lyrics to suit. That's is very clever and very well executed...I was singing this in my head and it fit perfectly so well done! Made me chuckle too!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019

Thanks, BK

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun write about the iron man and it read smoothly and delivered the message clearly, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed the read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019

Thank you, Dolly

Comment from Graybærd

Excellent

I was thinking of docking a star or two because I am going to bed and now I have that song in my head but nah... It's good, and this is from someone who doesn't like to iron.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019

Thank you, GB, for the excellent review.