Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This tyburn, Pleasant Music, has the proper structure and is bringing me a dinging sound that is clinging to my senses pinging in my brain.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks for the read and review. Hope the pinging stops soon.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I am not even going to attempt this form. You did it very well. Too much thinking...like palindromes...lol
I've known some awful blokes in my time but more helpful soulful folks...yay
God bless..I liked it

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019

Thanks much for the read and kind words in your review.

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

You've done a very good job of creating a meaningful poem in this very difficult format. I'm certain I could not have come up with such a fine piece of prose, and I know you'll do well in this contest.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019

Oh, thank you so much for the encouraging feedback. Much appreciated.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 18-Jan-2019

You're welcome, Harry.