We're Gonna Need a Bigger Scoop
A Cat-tastrophe12 total reviews
Comment from Randa Dayle
How literally cute! and the funniest part is the picture!
Good job and good luck in the contest!
I think it would be difficult to make sense with so few words1
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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How literally cute! and the funniest part is the picture!
Good job and good luck in the contest!
I think it would be difficult to make sense with so few words1
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Randa. I have trouble writing longer poems. Short ones are definitely easier for me. I so appreciate your read and review. Glad you enjoyed my kitty.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhhhhhh. Painful. But adorably so. Very cute haiku for a super adorable photo. I bet this will do very well in the contest. But even if it doesn't, it's still a wonderful day-brightener of an entry. xo
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Ohhhhhhh. Painful. But adorably so. Very cute haiku for a super adorable photo. I bet this will do very well in the contest. But even if it doesn't, it's still a wonderful day-brightener of an entry. xo
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Rachelle. I'm glad that it brightened your day a little.
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But, personally, I want to you to consider "Dave Barry of Fanstory."
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I love Dave Barry.
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Ditto. You have similar styles.
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You know what: I posted that Dave Barry comment to the wrong person!! (You sure are polite! Anyone else would have said, "Like, HUH?! What are you TALKING about!") Mea culpa. xo
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Glad to see other people doing that, too.
Comment from sfharper
Overall, the wit just kept coming. I like the idea of a bigger scoop with the struggling kitten who needed help. I like the word play and the sentiment, enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Overall, the wit just kept coming. I like the idea of a bigger scoop with the struggling kitten who needed help. I like the word play and the sentiment, enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you for seeing the details that I put into this one. I appreciate your careful review, and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Kerry Foley
Hello there, lol, That's really funny, pick of the litter - nice one! The picture is hilarious. The title gave me a chuckle too. lol Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Hello there, lol, That's really funny, pick of the litter - nice one! The picture is hilarious. The title gave me a chuckle too. lol Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Kerry. The title is my favorite part. Glad that you liked it.
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You're very welcome. So sorry for the late reply:))
Comment from victor 66
When our Siamese cat had kittens, it was like having four little gremlins around. You had to be very careful about throwing an empty bag away, one of the kittens might just be in it. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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When our Siamese cat had kittens, it was like having four little gremlins around. You had to be very careful about throwing an empty bag away, one of the kittens might just be in it. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Victor. I appreciate your review.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha, cute, Anonymous Poet, and it's actually witty and clever via your use of word play.
As I've been reading some of the entries in this contest I was beginning to wonder if folks here knew what the word "Witty" meant!
No problems on your end.
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Hahaha, cute, Anonymous Poet, and it's actually witty and clever via your use of word play.
As I've been reading some of the entries in this contest I was beginning to wonder if folks here knew what the word "Witty" meant!
No problems on your end.
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Dean. I'm getting strange reviews on this one. Fine ratings, but no one was mentioning the poem exactly. I was beginning to wonder if it was as witty as I intended.
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You never know how voters are gonna react.
But I felt it was very clever, for what it's worth.
It's still very early, we'll see what happens.
~Dean
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Thank you for that, Dean. I enjoy word plays. Often, my "cleverness" comes back to haunt me.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Now, this is FUNNY . As a cat lover, I adore kittens. It is also a very clever idea for the contest and I wish you the very best of luck. It is great you aced both the 5-7-5 and the theme.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Now, this is FUNNY . As a cat lover, I adore kittens. It is also a very clever idea for the contest and I wish you the very best of luck. It is great you aced both the 5-7-5 and the theme.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Sherry. It's hard for me to be witty. I'm glad you thought that I satisfied the theme.
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Well, this was witty!!
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Thank you. We'll see if others agree. But your opinion means a lot.
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crossing my fingers!! blessings
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL!
Dear Anonymous Poet,
Thank you for sharing your hilarious entry for the Witty animal poetry contest. You chose a great photo and paired it with just the right words.
Good luck to you in the contest,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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LOL!
Dear Anonymous Poet,
Thank you for sharing your hilarious entry for the Witty animal poetry contest. You chose a great photo and paired it with just the right words.
Good luck to you in the contest,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Patty. I'm glad that you liked it.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the humor contest
with very good play on words,
pick of the litter can have very different meanings.
Perfect choice of picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the humor contest
with very good play on words,
pick of the litter can have very different meanings.
Perfect choice of picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you for mentioning the play on words. Few people are mentioning that. I was beginning to wonder how effective it was.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the nasty task to clean up the litter box. It is something we need to do regularly the longer we wait the harder it is to get rid of the odors.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the nasty task to clean up the litter box. It is something we need to do regularly the longer we wait the harder it is to get rid of the odors.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review, Sandra.
