The Two of Me
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Comment from sfharper
I like how the sense of otherness pervades the normal outing. Everything seems social except this hidden sensation. I've had deja vu before and it is memorable just for that reason. Good details of place. I like your bit of dialogue. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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I like how the sense of otherness pervades the normal outing. Everything seems social except this hidden sensation. I've had deja vu before and it is memorable just for that reason. Good details of place. I like your bit of dialogue. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments and compliments.
Comment from 24chas
This was a fascinating read, unknown writer. The story was laid out well and had a good flow to it. I probably need to check the other writings, but I'm not sure where to look for them since the author info isn't here. Nice job.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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This was a fascinating read, unknown writer. The story was laid out well and had a good flow to it. I probably need to check the other writings, but I'm not sure where to look for them since the author info isn't here. Nice job.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments. I will post a name after the results. The book postings are in The Two of Me here not published yet still collecting material. Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from meeshu
kind of a weird little story that had me riveted until the end. a well written progression of mild tension and uneasiness building to an open end. very good..
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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kind of a weird little story that had me riveted until the end. a well written progression of mild tension and uneasiness building to an open end. very good..
Comment Written 02-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from kiwijenny
feelings fleed with the winds of time. ......fled
I bet it was something like having to pee. and memory.
I think that's why God gave us bladders....but I also have had eerie moments of definite deja vue...but it was more years ago. Now with tv playing the same commercial every few minutes we all get it
Lol
God bless... I liked it
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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feelings fleed with the winds of time. ......fled
I bet it was something like having to pee. and memory.
I think that's why God gave us bladders....but I also have had eerie moments of definite deja vue...but it was more years ago. Now with tv playing the same commercial every few minutes we all get it
Lol
God bless... I liked it
Comment Written 02-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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Thank you for catching my oversight.
Thanks for the Compliments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That feeling of deja vu comes to us sometimes without explanation and we try to remember but it is a momentary thought in the brain, you have likened this to a spiritual experience here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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That feeling of deja vu comes to us sometimes without explanation and we try to remember but it is a momentary thought in the brain, you have likened this to a spiritual experience here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the review and rating, Very Greatly Appreciated.
Spirituality may also be more of a individual practice and have to do with having a sense of peace and purpose. It relates to developing beliefs around the meaning of life and connections with others, and it too respects other's beliefs.