More Than Just Memories
A monostich entry8 total reviews
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Lovely picture and words. It almost feels as though your Monostich poem is dancing. I sense nostalgia is important to you and all of us.
My best in the contest,
Deborah
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
Dear Author,
Lovely picture and words. It almost feels as though your Monostich poem is dancing. I sense nostalgia is important to you and all of us.
My best in the contest,
Deborah
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Thank you for sharing your insightful sentiments.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made fabulous use of all your syllables in this meaningful one-liner
I can relate to. Your lively metaphors make your theme shine through movingly.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
You have made fabulous use of all your syllables in this meaningful one-liner
I can relate to. Your lively metaphors make your theme shine through movingly.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from LisaMay
This brings a nice image to think about... I picture the music of nostalgia as a slow, gently rhythmic glide (as a duo or solo) rather than a dance such as the twist or tango. And definitely from the heart.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
This brings a nice image to think about... I picture the music of nostalgia as a slow, gently rhythmic glide (as a duo or solo) rather than a dance such as the twist or tango. And definitely from the heart.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for sharing your insightful sentiments.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
We'll all have those songs that will never get old and we'll want to get up and dance to. Some of them the younger kids may not even understand, but to us it's perfect and that's all that matters. Great job
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
We'll all have those songs that will never get old and we'll want to get up and dance to. Some of them the younger kids may not even understand, but to us it's perfect and that's all that matters. Great job
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for sharing your insightful comments.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Oooooh - I love this one! It is so true, indeed. Lovely image you've displayed with your verse -- it is a great presentation. This should be a strong contender in the competition for sure. Thanks for sharing your work and best of luck in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
Hi Contest Author,
Oooooh - I love this one! It is so true, indeed. Lovely image you've displayed with your verse -- it is a great presentation. This should be a strong contender in the competition for sure. Thanks for sharing your work and best of luck in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad this monostich resonated with you.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. I think the message in the piece was beautifully stated and so very true. It was a good thought. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
This was a good read. I think the message in the piece was beautifully stated and so very true. It was a good thought. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you for sharing your valued insights.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Monostitch poem you have penned for the contest. You said a lot in so few words that are so very true. Lovely imagery and words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
This is a very well written Monostitch poem you have penned for the contest. You said a lot in so few words that are so very true. Lovely imagery and words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your positive feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our memories are precious and when we are reminded of something from the past if fills us with euphoria that we did live then and it was all real, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
Our memories are precious and when we are reminded of something from the past if fills us with euphoria that we did live then and it was all real, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Yes, memories are real and can give us a lot of joy when we reminisce, Dolly.