Anger
Senyru about anger18 total reviews
Comment from Ross E Silke
Nice! I really like the colours and the pciture you chose. It has an interesting twist on 'anger,' although I don't think anger is always magnificent--maybe a better word could be used? I get what you are saying though, that it can be turned into something better. I like the last line has a good suggestions for the reader as to what to do with anger. What about 'molton and transformable?' instead? Just a thought. Have a great week ahead! I enjoyed reading this and interpreting its meaning.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Nice! I really like the colours and the pciture you chose. It has an interesting twist on 'anger,' although I don't think anger is always magnificent--maybe a better word could be used? I get what you are saying though, that it can be turned into something better. I like the last line has a good suggestions for the reader as to what to do with anger. What about 'molton and transformable?' instead? Just a thought. Have a great week ahead! I enjoyed reading this and interpreting its meaning.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Comment from Dean Kuch
I've always looked at volcanic eruptions as Mother Nature's way of venting off a little steam and blowing her top temporarily, Anonymous Poet.
Your senryu is in good form focusing more on the aspects of human nature than nature itself.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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I've always looked at volcanic eruptions as Mother Nature's way of venting off a little steam and blowing her top temporarily, Anonymous Poet.
Your senryu is in good form focusing more on the aspects of human nature than nature itself.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
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Best regards to you as well.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Anger", is short succinct and very much to the point. Each line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six, but I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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"Anger", is short succinct and very much to the point. Each line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six, but I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
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Bridge, you're more than welcome,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from Yvon
Wow! I never read a poem that promoted anger in this way. As fiery as anger can be i hope you control your own anger. If it like this those in your path better watch out. Good contest entry.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Wow! I never read a poem that promoted anger in this way. As fiery as anger can be i hope you control your own anger. If it like this those in your path better watch out. Good contest entry.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Comment from June Sargent
So true. Not only will the heat of anger destroy all around us, but it eats away our soul from the inside. When it finally erupts, it will not be pretty. And the damage may have everlasting consequences. Well said.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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So true. Not only will the heat of anger destroy all around us, but it eats away our soul from the inside. When it finally erupts, it will not be pretty. And the damage may have everlasting consequences. Well said.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
Omg - this is excellent! The Senyru, just in and of itself, is chilling and spot-on. With the picture, it is little short of spectacular. This one has Front-Runner written all over it! Good luck to you, but I honestly don't think you'll need it. This one definitely stands out. xo
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Omg - this is excellent! The Senyru, just in and of itself, is chilling and spot-on. With the picture, it is little short of spectacular. This one has Front-Runner written all over it! Good luck to you, but I honestly don't think you'll need it. This one definitely stands out. xo
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved your words here and you will get my vote, I think the word (reduce) should read (reduced), it would work much better and there seems like there is a space there too! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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I loved your words here and you will get my vote, I think the word (reduce) should read (reduced), it would work much better and there seems like there is a space there too! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is an excellent way to describe anger. It is molten and magnificent in its destructive power to destroy. If left unchecked, it can reduce to ashes everything in its path. Thanks for sharing this well written poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This is an excellent way to describe anger. It is molten and magnificent in its destructive power to destroy. If left unchecked, it can reduce to ashes everything in its path. Thanks for sharing this well written poem. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written senryu about anger that can get out of control and burns like lava on everything they get in contact with and never stop until there is nothing left to build a relationship on.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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A very well-written senryu about anger that can get out of control and burns like lava on everything they get in contact with and never stop until there is nothing left to build a relationship on.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
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Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 senryu for the contest
with an intriguing connection of nature's "anger' in the lava
and human anger which have similar paths.
Impressive presentation
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 senryu for the contest
with an intriguing connection of nature's "anger' in the lava
and human anger which have similar paths.
Impressive presentation
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
Best Regards