Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well done, Euell! I like how you interwove the past painful memory of the racist tormentors and discouraging father to the current encouragement that he gave his sister that bore fruit. And I never did quite get that phantom that keeps appearing from another universe but more will come. So glad to see you post again!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you! :) March has been a strange and challenging month. My mental and physical self is almost numb from the exhaustion. I appreciate your review and time as always.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Cybertron,

This is a terrific story -- very imaginative, even though it's real life. I believe we grow by revisiting the past and comparing "then" to "now," and mulling how our perspectives have changed.

Only one small nit, in your notes section:

"My name and my sister�¢??s name is printed below the drawing we submitted."

The text editor has inserted some gremlins here.

Thanks so much for sharing an entertaining read. I am intrigued as to where you're going to take this story next.

Jan :-)

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019

Awesome! Thank you for an encouraging review!

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This continues to intrigue. The tone is slightly off but works for this peculiar tale. It is definitely, I think, unique.

Good stuff

You're a little too early from Halloween, - maybe for rather than from here.

All thee best
GMG

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019

I?ll work on it, and add onto the ending to keep the tone consistent. Thank you for that helpful insight I neglected to acknowledge.