The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Monsterous Me"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Earl Corp
This poem has a powerful message that we all should heed. We all have a monstrous me within ourselves. Your poem rhymed, makes sense, and invokes emotions within the reader. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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This poem has a powerful message that we all should heed. We all have a monstrous me within ourselves. Your poem rhymed, makes sense, and invokes emotions within the reader. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow, G, this is a powerful write you have offered here, sir -- the impact of your words and how you use that 'monstrous' term throughout is really well done!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Wow, G, this is a powerful write you have offered here, sir -- the impact of your words and how you use that 'monstrous' term throughout is really well done!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments, Blessings to you.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, gmartinez247. It had a good flow to it and the imagery was really inspiring. The message was good and I liked the way you stated it. Good job.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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This was a good read, gmartinez247. It had a good flow to it and the imagery was really inspiring. The message was good and I liked the way you stated it. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement, Blessings to you.