The Two of Me
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a fun and upbeat poem, GM! :) ;) Love the format of the single rhyme per stanza ... brings out the different dances per stanza like all the different blooms and animals in Springtime itself! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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What a fun and upbeat poem, GM! :) ;) Love the format of the single rhyme per stanza ... brings out the different dances per stanza like all the different blooms and animals in Springtime itself! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments. Blessings to you.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi G.,
This is a really lovely poem, filled with insightful wisdom. Your choice of image is perfect to ddepict the wheel turning. Nothing here to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hi G.,
This is a really lovely poem, filled with insightful wisdom. Your choice of image is perfect to ddepict the wheel turning. Nothing here to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments. Blessings to you.