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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Feline Fluidity"
A word collage about my life.
3 total reviews
Comment from
Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent imagery in the feel of the cat and the fluidity of its movement, you take us to what it is and what it is doing. Very nicely done for the contest entry
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
I thank you very much for the rating and the comments.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this Haiku because you described cats so perfectly! This feline has silky smooth moves and can still has the instinct to stalk its prey, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
I thank you so much for the rating and the comments!
Comment from
HealingMuse
Hi FM,
Isn't this the truth! Lol
They are so soft, silky, and smooth in their movements until Boom! they pounce on their prey.
I enjoy watching our kitty hunt too, but feel sorry for the occasional moth that gets indoors and is tormented by her. (We do out best to safely capture and set them free outdoors.)
Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
I thank you ever so much for the rating, comments and good luck wish!
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