Dreams of Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Books"A word collage about my life.
6 total reviews
Comment from JudyE
It always seems that my favourite poems of this type have some rhyming in them. Books certainly bring pleasure to so many and 'treasure' is another word that is very appropriate where books are concerned.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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It always seems that my favourite poems of this type have some rhyming in them. Books certainly bring pleasure to so many and 'treasure' is another word that is very appropriate where books are concerned.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you! I greatly appreciate the stars and your comments!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
pleasure, leisure, treasure
excellent rhyme/near rhyme for the contest. It is a great 5-7-5 for the contest but even better because you rhymed it which makes it harder to do
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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pleasure, leisure, treasure
excellent rhyme/near rhyme for the contest. It is a great 5-7-5 for the contest but even better because you rhymed it which makes it harder to do
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the stars and comments! Couldn't make the middle line rhyme exactly and still say what I wanted it ti say.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a good 5-7-5 poetry, I enjoyed the clarity of expression, flow of thoughts, thematic comprehension about reading and wisdom; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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This is a good 5-7-5 poetry, I enjoyed the clarity of expression, flow of thoughts, thematic comprehension about reading and wisdom; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you. I greatly appreciate the stars and your review!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
You know? I really like this piece. It reads quite simply but yet we know it's not the case to make these things readable. Many feel like a syllable count has taken preference but here you've managed the rhyming as well, which I always like.
very nicely done
GMG
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Hi there,
You know? I really like this piece. It reads quite simply but yet we know it's not the case to make these things readable. Many feel like a syllable count has taken preference but here you've managed the rhyming as well, which I always like.
very nicely done
GMG
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you. I ever so much appreciate the stars and the comments!
Comment from Beri Bee
You've done an excellent job with 5-7-5! It's meaningful and delightful. Your rhyming is a nice touch and deftly done! Best of luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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You've done an excellent job with 5-7-5! It's meaningful and delightful. Your rhyming is a nice touch and deftly done! Best of luck with the contest!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you ever so much The stars, comments and best wishes are greatly appreciated!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this write, books give a great deal of pleasure to us and I have recently bought some amazing books and look forward to reading them, this poem champions the written word, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed this write, books give a great deal of pleasure to us and I have recently bought some amazing books and look forward to reading them, this poem champions the written word, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the stars and review! Greatly appreciated!