Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "The Betrayer Slayer Prayer!"Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being afraid of the demons at night is a terrifying experience and when I first lost my husband I found sleeping on my own a challenge and often had nightmares. You have found a way of keeping yourself safe with your faith here, I enjoyed these sentiments very much, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Being afraid of the demons at night is a terrifying experience and when I first lost my husband I found sleeping on my own a challenge and often had nightmares. You have found a way of keeping yourself safe with your faith here, I enjoyed these sentiments very much, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Blessings and Thank you for the Review and Kind Encouraging Positive Words.
Comment from Vera Yan
Nice topic, but the excessive amount of exclamation mark make the mark lose it's value of depicting excitement/surprise. Also, there are multiple words that are capitalized even though they don't have to be.
I like the part where it says, "I'm armored in this prayer" - nice choice of words.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Nice topic, but the excessive amount of exclamation mark make the mark lose it's value of depicting excitement/surprise. Also, there are multiple words that are capitalized even though they don't have to be.
I like the part where it says, "I'm armored in this prayer" - nice choice of words.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you for noticing the emphasis warns! Blessings!
