Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "As Light As A Feather"My Collection of Love Poetry
9 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl I
Yes, a loved heart does feel light as a feather! This is just what I needed to pull me out of the slump I was in from reading the last one. Nice job, and thank you!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
Yes, a loved heart does feel light as a feather! This is just what I needed to pull me out of the slump I was in from reading the last one. Nice job, and thank you!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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I?m glad, thank you.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about being able to see the beauty in everything makes our hearts as light as a feather and puts a smile on our faces no matter how bad things seem around us.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
A very well-written poem about being able to see the beauty in everything makes our hearts as light as a feather and puts a smile on our faces no matter how bad things seem around us.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this Trisha, I liked the feeling of spring meaning everything is light and springy! We have definite seasons in the UK and the changes are district, much like the US, in the Canary Islands there is only a subtle change, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
I enjoyed this Trisha, I liked the feeling of spring meaning everything is light and springy! We have definite seasons in the UK and the changes are district, much like the US, in the Canary Islands there is only a subtle change, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from QC Poet
Great writing and enjoyable messaging in this poem offering. May I suggest adding commas or periods where one sentence ends and the next starts. Great change of season poem and photo combination. Blessings and Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
Great writing and enjoyable messaging in this poem offering. May I suggest adding commas or periods where one sentence ends and the next starts. Great change of season poem and photo combination. Blessings and Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
Love fills the heart for all seasons. Good free verse.9999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999990
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
Love fills the heart for all seasons. Good free verse.9999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999990
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
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Welcome,
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a delightful little piece of poetic art. The content is as soft and feathery as the artwork itself. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
This is a delightful little piece of poetic art. The content is as soft and feathery as the artwork itself. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a short and sweet poem with an image that enhances the piece. I especially liked the last two lines. It is a good example of free verse. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
This is a short and sweet poem with an image that enhances the piece. I especially liked the last two lines. It is a good example of free verse. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lovely, ultra-concise poem pays tribute to each of the seasons
through an appealing mix of literal and figurative language. I especially like the simile at the end.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
This lovely, ultra-concise poem pays tribute to each of the seasons
through an appealing mix of literal and figurative language. I especially like the simile at the end.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yes it most certainly does, ma'am!! ;) :) What wonderful , year-round smile for the cradled heart!! ;) Love your use of the different forms of love depending on the season! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
Yes it most certainly does, ma'am!! ;) :) What wonderful , year-round smile for the cradled heart!! ;) Love your use of the different forms of love depending on the season! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha