What lies ahead?
a 5-7-510 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
The joy of children personified is contained in your 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your selected illustration exemplifies their squeals, bewilderment of life and the various pathways to explore.
Best wishes in the voting for your entry.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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The joy of children personified is contained in your 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your selected illustration exemplifies their squeals, bewilderment of life and the various pathways to explore.
Best wishes in the voting for your entry.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Mark Thanks so much for a review no luck in the votes but worth a try Cheers Christine
Comment from zanya
Yes and a wonderful poetic reminder of what childhood should be all about - laughter and 'delighted squeals' and 'innocence personified'- great pic to accompany
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Yes and a wonderful poetic reminder of what childhood should be all about - laughter and 'delighted squeals' and 'innocence personified'- great pic to accompany
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Zanya Thanks so mich for your review and yes childhood squeals make ones laugh Cheers Christine
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your verse, and the matching picture, show children at their very best. Happy, playing and innocent.
And yes, their futures are unknown.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Your verse, and the matching picture, show children at their very best. Happy, playing and innocent.
And yes, their futures are unknown.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Sharon, Thanks for reading and reviewing no luck in the votes but thats OK Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fresh and unique write filled with hope and promise and children are our future and the world is their gift, unknown paths ahead indeed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This is a fresh and unique write filled with hope and promise and children are our future and the world is their gift, unknown paths ahead indeed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Dolly, Thanks very much appreciate ypur review Cheers Chris
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about children that can spontaneously burst out in laughter and we know and see their happiness in their eyes. We wonder if they will still be so happy in a few years time.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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A very well-written poem about children that can spontaneously burst out in laughter and we know and see their happiness in their eyes. We wonder if they will still be so happy in a few years time.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Sandra, Thanks so much for your review had fun trying Cheers Chris
Comment from Iza Deleanu
So right what lies ahead, none of us is capable of guessing. So the best approach is to go with the flow and worry about it when wearing that particular type of shoes. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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So right what lies ahead, none of us is capable of guessing. So the best approach is to go with the flow and worry about it when wearing that particular type of shoes. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Iza, Thanks for your review and yes life is an interesting ride Cheers Christine
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a structurally sound 5-7-5. The content is fun and playful. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a structurally sound 5-7-5. The content is fun and playful. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Monica Thanks for ypur review no luck this time bit ypurs was appreciated Cheers Chris
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written poem so aptly expresses the thoughts I have about my grandchildren and their children. I pray for them a LOT. "Innocence
personified"--I like that.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Your well-written poem so aptly expresses the thoughts I have about my grandchildren and their children. I pray for them a LOT. "Innocence
personified"--I like that.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Janice Thanks for your review and lets hope innocence stays a long time for most kids Cheers Chris
Comment from Y. M. Roger
No.... that's not what you should focus on when you hear those squeals...you should focus on their happiness and innocence and let it soothe your soul for today: tomorrow has enough trouble of its own. :) A wonderful offering for the contest -- good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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No.... that's not what you should focus on when you hear those squeals...you should focus on their happiness and innocence and let it soothe your soul for today: tomorrow has enough trouble of its own. :) A wonderful offering for the contest -- good luck! ;)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Hi YM Rogers Thanks for your review and yes I know it is noce to hear their squeals But one onder in this day and age Hmmm Thanks for your good luck
Comment from Sallyo
Yes, we all hope the path ahead is going to be an easy one but it almost never is. It's a pity we don't have abit more control over what life throws at us.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Yes, we all hope the path ahead is going to be an easy one but it almost never is. It's a pity we don't have abit more control over what life throws at us.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Hi Sallyo Thanks for reviewing my 5-7-5 one never knows hope for a good outcome