Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

I loved your commemoration to snowfall in Southern California. However, I question the abbreviations making this a Lune Poem. You should double-check on that. The third verse was great. Good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019

Thanks for the review and shared concerns.
Blessings to you.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing the significant snow event in the Antelope Valley both in the Lune and in your notes. Enjoy the early white Christmas and best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019

Thank you for the review and compliments. We do get some bi- yearly, mostly in the mountain passes to the San Fernando Valley and San Gabriel Valley. Blessings, Happy Holidays.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a fun poem for the contest with good info and picture. The syllable count is correct per line although I'm not sure the abbreviations are clear. I know you had only so many syllables for each line. This isn't a criticism just my opinion. I enjoyed your expanded author notes. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019

Thank you for the review and positive encouragement. Blessings

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made effective use of all of your syllables in this poem that describes an unexpected delight. You have used specific details to show
how pleased you are. :-)

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019

Thank you for your Support and Encouragement. Blessings