Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "The Best Beat For My Drum "Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
2 total reviews
Comment from Frederick Samson
This poem is ok. It has a good beat to it, unfortunately to create a nice flow it should be a lot easier to actually read. Drums and flowing letters contradict each other (not in a 'poetic way' either). Thanks for sharing though
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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This poem is ok. It has a good beat to it, unfortunately to create a nice flow it should be a lot easier to actually read. Drums and flowing letters contradict each other (not in a 'poetic way' either). Thanks for sharing though
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thanks for the review and time to read it. Blessings to you.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I couldn't place a sense of music with this piece because I didn't know if it was intended to be upbeat or slow in tempo. I could see it both ways. The lyrics were kind and soft and full of love. It sounds like a prayer that someone is saying so they may keep their love another day.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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I couldn't place a sense of music with this piece because I didn't know if it was intended to be upbeat or slow in tempo. I could see it both ways. The lyrics were kind and soft and full of love. It sounds like a prayer that someone is saying so they may keep their love another day.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review and positive interpretation of this poem, as aging man with health issues - Your last sentence is pretty accurate.
