Aaaaah... A Magical Childhood
Where play time isn't always just soccer and hide-n-seek...12 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, they (whomever they are) says mom always knows best and in this case I agree. I enjoyed your fun contest entry, YM. You lines a filled with great imagery, dialogue, and descriptive words. The picture is perfect. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Well, they (whomever they are) says mom always knows best and in this case I agree. I enjoyed your fun contest entry, YM. You lines a filled with great imagery, dialogue, and descriptive words. The picture is perfect. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Always so good to hear from you, Jan -- thank you so much for your time and your support! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
Haaaaahahahaha!!! Oh dear, poor old Charming. I guess boys will be boys, but if I were Charming's parents, I might have a problem with Merlin hanging around with their son...
What a wonderful story! I'll be smiling all night! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Haaaaahahahaha!!! Oh dear, poor old Charming. I guess boys will be boys, but if I were Charming's parents, I might have a problem with Merlin hanging around with their son...
What a wonderful story! I'll be smiling all night! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this one - I'm really trying to lighten the mood round here! Thank you so much for your review and those bright, sunshiny stars!!
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I've been fine, up to now. Tonight I am freaking out.
Comment from Bichon
This was a very charming and fun story to read. You created interesting characters and a plot in a limited amount of words, so great job! The photo is adorable too.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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This was a very charming and fun story to read. You created interesting characters and a plot in a limited amount of words, so great job! The photo is adorable too.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Aaaaah... A Magical Childhood
Hello, my friend,
a great story about kids and their games. Boys will be boys...applies. I have a two years old grandson that is the kind of kid that would do something like this.... lol It's great.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Aaaaah... A Magical Childhood
Hello, my friend,
a great story about kids and their games. Boys will be boys...applies. I have a two years old grandson that is the kind of kid that would do something like this.... lol It's great.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed, Gypsy - thank you for the review!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Yeah, this is a magical childhood filled with everything that seems ordinary to a child. Sometimes growing up isn't all that some think it will be. Enjoy your childhood before it's to late. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Yeah, this is a magical childhood filled with everything that seems ordinary to a child. Sometimes growing up isn't all that some think it will be. Enjoy your childhood before it's to late. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your comments and review!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a cute story. Boys really do love frogs, and they can make them become part of their playful fantasies with special names and positions in life.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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This is a cute story. Boys really do love frogs, and they can make them become part of their playful fantasies with special names and positions in life.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your time and your review, Rebecca!!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 200 Word Story writing prompt.
This fairy tale is well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 200 Word Story writing prompt.
This fairy tale is well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your time and your review!
Comment from JudyE
What a great entry for the 200 word story contest. So funny.
Just one point in the following:
"Yeah, it's PC, Mom, but I can fix this!"
She took the frog and headed downstairs.
"Mom! Where you going?"
"To call Princess' mom to get her over here to fix this!"
You've used 'fix this' twice within a few sentences. I might have tried to come up with an alternative for one of them. But it's a great read as is. Good luck.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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What a great entry for the 200 word story contest. So funny.
Just one point in the following:
"Yeah, it's PC, Mom, but I can fix this!"
She took the frog and headed downstairs.
"Mom! Where you going?"
"To call Princess' mom to get her over here to fix this!"
You've used 'fix this' twice within a few sentences. I might have tried to come up with an alternative for one of them. But it's a great read as is. Good luck.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the review and your time in commenting on this one, Judy. You are always so appreciated!
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Exceptional! You well executed within the laid out rules for this contest in every ramification, and made a perfect use of the 200 wordings! The story is very engaging, and the picture is grand!
My best wishes in the contest; kudos!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Exceptional! You well executed within the laid out rules for this contest in every ramification, and made a perfect use of the 200 wordings! The story is very engaging, and the picture is grand!
My best wishes in the contest; kudos!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Oh, Precious -- you just put a big smile on my face over here even amidst the chaos!! ;) Thank you for your wonderful comments and for those bright, shiny stars!! May you find some brightness in the days ahead - take care! ;)
Comment from royowen
Ah the trials and tribulations of a mum, the boy who got caught with his Prince Charming, or rather a girl's Prince Charming, I loved this take about a boy, his frog, and a very smart mother, well done, good entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Ah the trials and tribulations of a mum, the boy who got caught with his Prince Charming, or rather a girl's Prince Charming, I loved this take about a boy, his frog, and a very smart mother, well done, good entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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'Twas fun to craft. Thank you for the review!
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Well done