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Ceremonial Intervention

Titanic Contest offering

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Ceremonial Intervention

Hello my friend

Good syllable count. Nice presentation. Great Honor to the Titanic tragedy. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanks for your time and comments.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

I liked the tying in of the words to the picture you've used here. The Greek mythology works well in adding a grander mythology to the Titanic's fate. Very clever, but many may miss the Selene reference I fear.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
    Thanx for the review on this one, GMG -- good to hear from you! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fun 5-7-5 for the contest as Selene's song rings in our ears and reminds us of this tragic scene as the ship sinks and lives are lost, an eerie write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
    Twas fun... gotta look at it little different than hollywood and history, ya know?! ;) LOL! ;) Thanx Dolly! ;)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought this was excellent. Really like the last line of your poem as that brings it all together. Made me feel a little sad! Well done - very creative take on the prompt.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much!
Comment from jenintorre
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This is a very good 5-7-5 about the Titanic. Very profound with well chosen artwork. I think it should do well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Wow amazing poem and so tragic, you have captured very well the tragedy of Titanic:"
Selene stood vigil
as Poseidon called her home ~
Titanic's last rites" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thank you!!