Adventure
The Spirit Of...9 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. The picture is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Those words make a great statement about the men, women, and children aboard the Titanic. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. The picture is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Those words make a great statement about the men, women, and children aboard the Titanic. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Good syllable count. Nice presentation. Great Honor to the Titanic tragedy. I really like it. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Hello my friend
Good syllable count. Nice presentation. Great Honor to the Titanic tragedy. I really like it. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
It seems like it was the cruise ship of days gone by. It was said to be unsinkable, but, what an unpleasant surprise. I've heard that this dilemma could have been avoided. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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It seems like it was the cruise ship of days gone by. It was said to be unsinkable, but, what an unpleasant surprise. I've heard that this dilemma could have been avoided. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I'm not sure the fate of the Titanic is a great advert for adventurous living...
It was a mammoth feat. Thousands of Irishmen to build the damn thing and then one Englishman to sink it - very impressive.
All requirements met, best of luck to you
GMG
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Hi there,
I'm not sure the fate of the Titanic is a great advert for adventurous living...
It was a mammoth feat. Thousands of Irishmen to build the damn thing and then one Englishman to sink it - very impressive.
All requirements met, best of luck to you
GMG
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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How true, Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes, I imagine that few people wanted to step on a boat after this tragic event, captain Smith is immortalised in my home town in a statue in the park, your few words are sad and true, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Yes, I imagine that few people wanted to step on a boat after this tragic event, captain Smith is immortalised in my home town in a statue in the park, your few words are sad and true, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow. I guess that is true. Never thought of it that way. Great job in sharing your message with only three lines and the tight syllable count. This flowed well and no word seemed forced. Great job.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Wow. I guess that is true. Never thought of it that way. Great job in sharing your message with only three lines and the tight syllable count. This flowed well and no word seemed forced. Great job.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for seeing my view, much appreciated
Comment from LisaMay
Yours is a neatly worked poem,
The story of the Titanic continues to fascinate people. It was supposed to be the voyage of a lifetime, but it ended so many lives - their sense of adventure doomed them. The adventure lives on for many, such as James Cameron researching the wreck.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Yours is a neatly worked poem,
The story of the Titanic continues to fascinate people. It was supposed to be the voyage of a lifetime, but it ended so many lives - their sense of adventure doomed them. The adventure lives on for many, such as James Cameron researching the wreck.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you, those adventurers were looking for a new life, much appreciated
Comment from Puzzle
I'm voting for this piece. Hands down! It is well written and it embraces the positivity from the people who's spirits live on from this tragic incident. Great job!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I'm voting for this piece. Hands down! It is well written and it embraces the positivity from the people who's spirits live on from this tragic incident. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this very encouraging review and comments
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good poem for the prompt. I like the picture.
I don't think in killed the spirit of adventure. More
cruise ships were built. I think this virus we are living
with now is killing the spirit of adventure for us now.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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This is a good poem for the prompt. I like the picture.
I don't think in killed the spirit of adventure. More
cruise ships were built. I think this virus we are living
with now is killing the spirit of adventure for us now.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Sorry I don't get your comments, it says forever living- not meaning killed adventure but the spirit of adventure is forever living?
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I am sorry I didn't take the last line correctly .
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