Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "April's Breath"na-po-wri-mo contest
7 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like the look and sound of this. I'd love to be out partaking of this beautiful land. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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I really like the look and sound of this. I'd love to be out partaking of this beautiful land. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for your review and compliments. Dove
Comment from kahpot
How beautifully you describe the changing of seasons, as the fresh air of new life come to us, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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How beautifully you describe the changing of seasons, as the fresh air of new life come to us, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your compliment and review,
Comment from gingermo
Your adjectives, cool, light, pillow-soft, gentle, all add to the poem's sense of airiness. The rhyming in the last line finishes the poem off beautifully. Certainly worth voting for.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Your adjectives, cool, light, pillow-soft, gentle, all add to the poem's sense of airiness. The rhyming in the last line finishes the poem off beautifully. Certainly worth voting for.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your compliments and review.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nice. It describes the wonderful days of spring after a long winter. We can look forward to just enjoying ourselves outside and not cooped up. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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This is very nice. It describes the wonderful days of spring after a long winter. We can look forward to just enjoying ourselves outside and not cooped up. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your compliment, review and good luck wishes.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
April always seems so fragrant when the wind gently blows the sweet smelling blossom scents your way. Springtime is a wonderful time of year. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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April always seems so fragrant when the wind gently blows the sweet smelling blossom scents your way. Springtime is a wonderful time of year. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your compliment and good luck wishes.
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My pleasure.
Comment from zanya
This Tetractys poem effectively conveys the sense of an April evening withj all its freshness of Spring - those gentle breezes that gladden our hearts as winter takes its leave
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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This Tetractys poem effectively conveys the sense of an April evening withj all its freshness of Spring - those gentle breezes that gladden our hearts as winter takes its leave
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your compliment and review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Teyractys about the cool April air and the breezes wafting through the trees us still a wonderful day despite the cold chill in the air, and warmer Spring will come soon.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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A very well-written Teyractys about the cool April air and the breezes wafting through the trees us still a wonderful day despite the cold chill in the air, and warmer Spring will come soon.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review.