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The Stroller

150 Word Story contest entry

2 total reviews 
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

Very nice piece you've crafted for the competition here. Spot on word count too. I hope it does well as it's different from the rest. Good fun piece.

GMG

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    Thank you for the great review, GMG. I really appreciate the generous stars and the good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from humpwhistle
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Well, I guess that's what happens when people can't restrain themselves.
I'm not sure I'd want to work for either of them. Or, ride the subway, for that matter.
The coincidence at the end gives your story the 'Flash finale'.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Lee. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece.