Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Legacy "Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
4 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
Family is so good
Nice poem, nice idea and great collage. Time does fly. It's good to appreciate them, our family. To write about them is a labor of love
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Family is so good
Nice poem, nice idea and great collage. Time does fly. It's good to appreciate them, our family. To write about them is a labor of love
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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I thank you for the Review and Kind compliments. Blessings to you.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a lovely little poem that we truly enjoyed reading. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely perfect. The rhyming is really good and the syllable count is very consistent. We did notice a small typo. The second line says gradkids instead of grandkids. That in no way reflects poorly on this beautiful poem. Have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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This is a lovely little poem that we truly enjoyed reading. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely perfect. The rhyming is really good and the syllable count is very consistent. We did notice a small typo. The second line says gradkids instead of grandkids. That in no way reflects poorly on this beautiful poem. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the Review and Correction, I overlooked that even in my review prior to posting. Bless you for informing me of this.
Comment from Earl Corp
That's cool you used a collage of your own pictures to accompany your poem. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and touches the reader emotionally. Did you mean grandkids? Very nice job.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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That's cool you used a collage of your own pictures to accompany your poem. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and touches the reader emotionally. Did you mean grandkids? Very nice job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Hello Mr. Corp, Thank you for the Exceptional rating and review. I pray you are well and safe, Blessings to you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. I like the message of your poem. You look over a life of having children and are appreciative. I didn't think this line fit:
Faces of deceased family beginning to show,
Kinda dark in an otherwise upbeat poem. But otherwise absolutely terrific.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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I thought this was well written. I like the message of your poem. You look over a life of having children and are appreciative. I didn't think this line fit:
Faces of deceased family beginning to show,
Kinda dark in an otherwise upbeat poem. But otherwise absolutely terrific.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the Review and Support, in my family - We speak of the deceased often in conversations especially at child birth to see any resemblance to our deceased which may lead to the babies naming. Blessings