Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "How I Write A Poem"My book of poems and stories
17 total reviews
Comment from lightink
I like how you mixed the 'coming from the heart' thought with the little everyday inspirations, and how you conveyed the simplicity with which writing happens for you! Thank you for sharing it!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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I like how you mixed the 'coming from the heart' thought with the little everyday inspirations, and how you conveyed the simplicity with which writing happens for you! Thank you for sharing it!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
How I Write A Poem
Hello my friend
Good entry for the How do you write your poetry? contest. Your writing is clear and the rhyme is pleasant. Good presentation too.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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How I Write A Poem
Hello my friend
Good entry for the How do you write your poetry? contest. Your writing is clear and the rhyme is pleasant. Good presentation too.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your review and kind comments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Writer. I like everything about it. The words flow well, the rhymes are good, and the imagery is great. I could see this as I read. i like the idea of writing your poems from what life has taught.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Writer. I like everything about it. The words flow well, the rhymes are good, and the imagery is great. I could see this as I read. i like the idea of writing your poems from what life has taught.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your complimentary review. It has been so long since I have written anything, I was afraid as to how this piece would be received.
Comment from June Sargent
Memories are a treasure trove of experiences and ideas that translate into beautiful pieces of poetry. It's a means of sharing a part of our soul with others. And sometimes our words resonate deeply with those who have shared similar experiences. Nice entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Memories are a treasure trove of experiences and ideas that translate into beautiful pieces of poetry. It's a means of sharing a part of our soul with others. And sometimes our words resonate deeply with those who have shared similar experiences. Nice entry for the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your complimentary review. It has been so long since I have written anything, I was afraid as to how this piece would be received.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, clear, and creative. The reader found
that these words made sense. I especially liked the line about life's
lessons. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with
this poem. Hope you are having a great day!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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The author's words are interesting, clear, and creative. The reader found
that these words made sense. I especially liked the line about life's
lessons. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with
this poem. Hope you are having a great day!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your complimentary review. It has been so long since I have written anything, I was afraid as to how this piece would be received.
Comment from The Death
You have nicely captured how you let your soul/heart decide what it wants to say rather than your mind deciding that. That's how writing is supposed to bring relief. Fine use of consistent meter. Excellent use of rhyming as well. Most of the readers will be able to relate with this. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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You have nicely captured how you let your soul/heart decide what it wants to say rather than your mind deciding that. That's how writing is supposed to bring relief. Fine use of consistent meter. Excellent use of rhyming as well. Most of the readers will be able to relate with this. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind review. I am sometimes dry for a long period until I feel the stimulation again. It has to flow for me.
Comment from zanya
yes it's difficult to pinpoint exactly from whence inspiration may spring but these stanzas give a good sense of it 'write of lessons life has taught ' nice pic
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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yes it's difficult to pinpoint exactly from whence inspiration may spring but these stanzas give a good sense of it 'write of lessons life has taught ' nice pic
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind review. I am sometimes dry for a long period until I feel the stimulation again. It has to flow for me.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem about what moves you to write is interesting and
descriptive. I must say that writing about life's lessons sometimes poses
a challenge for me.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Your ultra-concise poem about what moves you to write is interesting and
descriptive. I must say that writing about life's lessons sometimes poses
a challenge for me.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind review. I am sometimes dry for a long period until I feel the stimulation again. It has to flow for me.
Comment from mermaids
You have a smooth flow of rhyming ones that adds to the strength of your theme. "Thoughts spring from deep within my soul" is a lovely line I can relate to, I think that is where most poetry comes from.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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You have a smooth flow of rhyming ones that adds to the strength of your theme. "Thoughts spring from deep within my soul" is a lovely line I can relate to, I think that is where most poetry comes from.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind review. I am sometimes dry for a long period until I feel the stimulation again. It has to flow for me.
Comment from HarryT
Structure works. One can feel the process of creating. Nice flow throughout the work, except for last line where you use a near-rhyme with roam and poem. May be tome would be a better choice and provide and exact rhyme. You are the author only my opinion.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Structure works. One can feel the process of creating. Nice flow throughout the work, except for last line where you use a near-rhyme with roam and poem. May be tome would be a better choice and provide and exact rhyme. You are the author only my opinion.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I worked on that rhyme and could not come up with anything that kept up with the meter and rhymed well too. Thanks for your kind review. My OCD keeps me working on it though.
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Keep writing, enjoy your work.