Comment from Vedika2

Average

Enjoyable read. Tunnels being a metaphor of our deeds.
Will this Tunnel allow you To cross any Bridge? - very meaningful
Though I did not find any relevance to the cover photo.
Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020

Thanks for the Review.

reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020

Thanks again for the review, the explanation for the picture is the Native American Eagle is flying facing upward with the streaming ribbons representative of the tunnels (situation) we are digging ourself out of. Blessings

reply by Vedika2 on 30-Jul-2020

Hi, I am new to this platform and I see that I have missed the explanation of cover photo which you have provided in footnote. I take my comment back.
Thanks, will be more careful in future.

reply by Vedika2 on 30-Jul-2020

Hi, can I request you read my story, my first participation in contest. "Someone Else". Will appreciate your comments

Comment from elchupakabra

Good

I like the idea behind the piece but to be honest I personally found the execution to be a bit confusing. I understand it is a free verse and that is not the issue, some of the wording and the choice in punctuation I found to be odd and misplaced. It was still a good effort, good work and thank you for sharing :) Later daze.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020

Thanks for the Review.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020

Thanks for the Review and Kind Compliments.