Silent Journey
Unhindered thoughts about a lifetime.2 total reviews
Comment from roof35
This is well written with no errors. It is pretty deep and I am not sure I totally understood the message. If your illustration reflects your words, then I guess it is a comment on finding out in old age what we did not recognize in our youth.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This is well written with no errors. It is pretty deep and I am not sure I totally understood the message. If your illustration reflects your words, then I guess it is a comment on finding out in old age what we did not recognize in our youth.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review. Yes, you understood the meaning of the poem. :-)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this stanza :"that stains the aged cheek, in wiser silence
left to speak not, lest we tell
the secrets best borne in somber hue
among the falling leaves that whisper of
what most we fear." It's this about life, it's this about death, it's this about eternity." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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I love this stanza :"that stains the aged cheek, in wiser silence
left to speak not, lest we tell
the secrets best borne in somber hue
among the falling leaves that whisper of
what most we fear." It's this about life, it's this about death, it's this about eternity." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you Iza, I am honored you chose to read my poem.