From a Distance
Senryu Poem11 total reviews
Comment from sammielwf
Near or far. 1 foot or a 100 feet. Love is love. I am eternal optimist. I believe that love will find a way!
Loved this piece by you- and enjoyed the added impact with the photo.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
Near or far. 1 foot or a 100 feet. Love is love. I am eternal optimist. I believe that love will find a way!
Loved this piece by you- and enjoyed the added impact with the photo.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. Love will always find a way.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a fine thought for the Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
This is a fine thought for the Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanks a lot for your review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
A Relevant entry for the
Senryu Poetry writing prompt contest. I'm tired of the pandemic but we must follow the scientist advice to beat the covid19 virus.
Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
Hello anonymous
A Relevant entry for the
Senryu Poetry writing prompt contest. I'm tired of the pandemic but we must follow the scientist advice to beat the covid19 virus.
Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. I think everybody is sick of covid!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, From a Distance, presented as a 5-7-5, makes its point by noting that any distance can be seen as too far to be tolerated.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
This senryu, From a Distance, presented as a 5-7-5, makes its point by noting that any distance can be seen as too far to be tolerated.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from palmart
Present requirements for "social distancing" may lead us in a probably colder society, with feelings just to be shown at a given distance. Your poem reflects that new social relationships will have consequences in expressing love, as kisses cannot be given with masks...
Picture was definitively a great choice!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
Present requirements for "social distancing" may lead us in a probably colder society, with feelings just to be shown at a given distance. Your poem reflects that new social relationships will have consequences in expressing love, as kisses cannot be given with masks...
Picture was definitively a great choice!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks very much for your review
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You`re welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu about lovers who still love each other despite the social distancing rules they find other ways to communicate their feelings to one another.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
A very well-written Senryu about lovers who still love each other despite the social distancing rules they find other ways to communicate their feelings to one another.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from equestrik
Good write and an excellent illustration to go with it. It just goes to prove that life and love go on even in the midst of a pandemic. Nice job.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
Good write and an excellent illustration to go with it. It just goes to prove that life and love go on even in the midst of a pandemic. Nice job.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. Love will find a way.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent senryu for the contest
with a topical theme many will relate to.
Nice use of the expression, "at arm's length."
Good choice of art work too.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
This is an excellent senryu for the contest
with a topical theme many will relate to.
Nice use of the expression, "at arm's length."
Good choice of art work too.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is very Nice writing I like this. Very fitting visual for your poem. Well done. I like the way you portrayed the 6 feet apart like ocean between you.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
This is very Nice writing I like this. Very fitting visual for your poem. Well done. I like the way you portrayed the 6 feet apart like ocean between you.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!.... long as we're not in the 'baby-making' mood, I guess.... :) :) A 'current times' senryu offering for the contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
LOL!.... long as we're not in the 'baby-making' mood, I guess.... :) :) A 'current times' senryu offering for the contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. Next thing you know they'll come up with a new baby making method!!