Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "My Ties and Mai Tai's"Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
2 total reviews
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
I've only been a member of this site for a short time but this poem is one my very favorites.
I think some word selection could be better but that is not a major thing.
What your poem has throughout is a strong heart and a strong mind. And I was impressed with the lack of "poor me attitude" that you often see in writing when folks have gone through so much.
I will never think of the word "tie" again in the same way. You have changed me with your writing.
I can tell you are a good man and I wish you all of God's blessings. I will pray for you.--Cynthia
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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I've only been a member of this site for a short time but this poem is one my very favorites.
I think some word selection could be better but that is not a major thing.
What your poem has throughout is a strong heart and a strong mind. And I was impressed with the lack of "poor me attitude" that you often see in writing when folks have gone through so much.
I will never think of the word "tie" again in the same way. You have changed me with your writing.
I can tell you are a good man and I wish you all of God's blessings. I will pray for you.--Cynthia
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you and God Bless you for your Time to Read, Rate and Review this poem offering.
Comment from lyenochka
I liked your creative use of "ties" from that article of clothing to ways of being connected and you use "ties" in the plural form of words like "possibilities" and "insanities." Lots of word fun in your poem!
Gone to Morn in ties (mourn?)
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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I liked your creative use of "ties" from that article of clothing to ways of being connected and you use "ties" in the plural form of words like "possibilities" and "insanities." Lots of word fun in your poem!
Gone to Morn in ties (mourn?)
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the Time to Read and Review this poem offering. I'll make the spelling correction also, Blessings.