Aghast
A (slightly modified) Octogram poem102 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
o.k. to be honest this is not my type of poem but you did a great job on it. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with all the things you can do on it. Great job. Teri
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
o.k. to be honest this is not my type of poem but you did a great job on it. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with all the things you can do on it. Great job. Teri
Comment Written 04-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
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Thank you, Teri.
Stories about someone else's grand kids who aren't related to me or my family in any way really isn't my favorite kind of story, either.
Still, I read and review them without saying so, out of courtesy to those who are my friends..
I pretty much know before getting started, and by the author I'm about to review, what type of story I am in for.
Thank you for your review.
~Dean
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Thank you Dean and I truly appreciate it very much. I do love your work. You are a great author and just all around good person. hugs, Teri
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So are you, Teri.
Thanks again.
~Dean
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you are so welcome. Have a blessed day! Teri
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Thank you Dean and I truly appreciate it very much. I do love your work. You are a great author and just all around good person. hugs, Teri
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you are so welcome. Have a blessed day! Teri
Comment from Spiritual Echo
What is the font you used? Man, who could believe a word like aghast could turn into green slime and crickets. As usual, the poem is off the mainstream, but ghoulish in content. Still, U miss your prose.
Great poem.
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
What is the font you used? Man, who could believe a word like aghast could turn into green slime and crickets. As usual, the poem is off the mainstream, but ghoulish in content. Still, U miss your prose.
Great poem.
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
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The font is called "Black Adder" , Ingrid.
I wrote a 150 horror story recently.
Only something like 22 people read and reviewed it which is why I gave up writing prose (for the most part), and concentrate on poetry. No one wants to read your prose.
Take care, and thanks for the R&R.
~Dean