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Comment from honeytree
Great art work and words written.
Within today's world life can be tough
We hate one another more instead of caring for others.
We love materialistic ways within our lives
God wants us to love and care for others more.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Great art work and words written.
Within today's world life can be tough
We hate one another more instead of caring for others.
We love materialistic ways within our lives
God wants us to love and care for others more.
Honey tree
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Thanks for your insight and positive review:-)
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I liked what you wrote very much.
Honey tree
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
A very good entry for the contest, Anupam. You are absolutely correct in comparing our childhood carefreeness to living in a protective cocoon. To bad we all have to emerge from that cocoon sooner or later.
Best wishes for the contest!
bichonfrisegirl
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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A very good entry for the contest, Anupam. You are absolutely correct in comparing our childhood carefreeness to living in a protective cocoon. To bad we all have to emerge from that cocoon sooner or later.
Best wishes for the contest!
bichonfrisegirl
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Glad you liked it.thanks for the review:-)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, anupam, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the way we would like to find the protection we found in childhood. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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this is very well written, anupam, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the way we would like to find the protection we found in childhood. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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I am glad you like it.thanks for positive feedback:-)
Comment from country ranch writer
YES THE REAL WORLD IS A HECK OF A REALITY TRIP FOR SURE, NOTING LIKE WHEN YOU WERE A KID WHERE YOU WERE PROTECTED FROM THE GROWN UP WORLD. IN THIS WORLD YOU HAVE TO BE PERSISTENT TO MAKE YOUR WAY IN THE WORLD AND NOT BE DISCOURAGED BY OTHERS
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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YES THE REAL WORLD IS A HECK OF A REALITY TRIP FOR SURE, NOTING LIKE WHEN YOU WERE A KID WHERE YOU WERE PROTECTED FROM THE GROWN UP WORLD. IN THIS WORLD YOU HAVE TO BE PERSISTENT TO MAKE YOUR WAY IN THE WORLD AND NOT BE DISCOURAGED BY OTHERS
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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I thank you for such deep look into it and positive review
Comment from O. Warfield
So few words with so much meaning. I would think all of us at one time or another have wished we could go back in time. When things were so much simpler. Eat, sleep, play, first grades in school. Those were the days.
Good entry.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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So few words with so much meaning. I would think all of us at one time or another have wished we could go back in time. When things were so much simpler. Eat, sleep, play, first grades in school. Those were the days.
Good entry.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Thanks for your kind remarks:-)
Comment from visionary1234
A delightful entry for the 5-7-5. "Cocoon", of course, has so many connotations of protection, insulation from the outside world etc, so a good parallel to human life too. Well done! :)Sharyn
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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A delightful entry for the 5-7-5. "Cocoon", of course, has so many connotations of protection, insulation from the outside world etc, so a good parallel to human life too. Well done! :)Sharyn
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Really so nice of you.thanks for the excellent review:-)
Comment from Kaibagirl17
I agree with the author notes. When one has been exposed to the world we live in today, they can't help but long for the days when they were a bright-eyed carefree child who believed evil and bad things were merely characters in a fairy tale that their mother read them after that same mother tucked them lovingly into bed. I'm sure if it was possible to return to those days, many would.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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I agree with the author notes. When one has been exposed to the world we live in today, they can't help but long for the days when they were a bright-eyed carefree child who believed evil and bad things were merely characters in a fairy tale that their mother read them after that same mother tucked them lovingly into bed. I'm sure if it was possible to return to those days, many would.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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I am glad you received the message.thanks for your kind words:-)
Comment from Selina Stambi
What a lovely piece of verse - short and brief, though it is.
In a few words you convey the shining, breathless innocence of childhood.
Well done. Nice to meet you! :)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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What a lovely piece of verse - short and brief, though it is.
In a few words you convey the shining, breathless innocence of childhood.
Well done. Nice to meet you! :)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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I am glad you find it interesting.
Happy to meet you.thanks for your sweet words:-)
Comment from KarlAnonymous
Well you definitely deserve the accolades that accompany this poem. You clearly follow the 5-7-5 syllable count. You wrote a beautiful poem with few words. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Well you definitely deserve the accolades that accompany this poem. You clearly follow the 5-7-5 syllable count. You wrote a beautiful poem with few words. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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I am honored by your kind thoughts and review.thank you:-)
Comment from GarthL
A syllable perfect 5-7-5 and a great analogy of life. Excellent image to enhance the lyrical content. For page balance I'd suggest the text could be centre justified!?
Good luck in the contest and life generally. Livelove'n'peace, Garth
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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A syllable perfect 5-7-5 and a great analogy of life. Excellent image to enhance the lyrical content. For page balance I'd suggest the text could be centre justified!?
Good luck in the contest and life generally. Livelove'n'peace, Garth
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the praise of content.i will look at the formatting.thanks for wishes:-)
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My pleasure, you did well!!