Comment from Bobby Jo

Good

I thought this was good, but I'm not sure I understood it to well. It just didn't really spark me. Thanks for sharing though.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Exceptional

Revival of the red as a gift of reincarnation is a good conviction retold about the vampires who otherwise are fascinating creature, dark and white aspects brought in simply. 16/708

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

I am amazed and so glad.i appreciate your thoughts and 6 stars.it means a lotw.Thanks for your kind words and exceptional review:-)

Comment from Maria C.

Excellent

Very good alliteration in each line. I like the wording "luminal life-liquor and rave resurrection." Very clever 5/7/5.

Maria C.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Good words with a good picture to tell of a beautiful vampire. She looks ready to bite someone. Good job, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thank you:-)

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hello, AS. You are really very talented, aren't you? I have been reading your work of late and am truly impressed.
You may very well win this contest. Mark my words. Bob

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

I am so glad that you think i may win.i appreciate your words.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

reply by Mastery on 08-Jul-2013

:) Bob

Comment from MidnightWriter4U

Excellent

I count 5-7-5 syllable count. Love the use of "l" sounds, then the strong emphatic line with "r" sounds. Only suggestion would be to capitalize each line or no capitals at all. Great artwork for theme.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

I appreciate your thoughts and suggestions,will surely look at it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

reply by MidnightWriter4U on 08-Jul-2013

You are welcome. MN :)

Comment from Malachai

Exceptional

Wow!!! Powerful. I love your use of alliteration. This is such an ingenious people to write about in poetry. Thank you.
Rebecca

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

I am glad you liked it so much.i appreciate your thoughts.it means a lot to me.Thanks for your kind words and exceptional review:-)

Comment from Ridley Williams

Excellent

This short piece presents a stunning image.
The verse, coupled with the art paint
a vivid picture in the readers mind. Very
original portrayal, Ridley

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from whizpurr ^-^

Excellent

Hi Anupam,
Hmmm... you certainly explored an interesting concept in your short poem. Your work was artfully displayed and I noticed your abundant use of alliteration. Not so sure about the "rave resurrection" part... most vampires I've read about are dreadfully unhappy and having the undead quality about them brings perpetual misery! But that is just my opinion. It's quite a good 5/7/5 poem.
Kind regards, W ^-^

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

I apprecitate your thoughts.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Anupam Sharma,

Your poem is interesting and the picture goes with it very well. I'd never have thought to write about vampires and leeches. You have a good imagination and great gift.

God's blessings always, Kat

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

I appreciate it.Thanks for your kind words,blessings and excellent review:-)
regards