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My Granddaughter, Alexis

Acrostic for Alexis

28 total reviews 
Comment from Susan Larson
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What a lovely tribute to your granddaughter. She's a very lucky girl to have a grandmother who is so tuned in to her interests and personality that she can compose such a nice poem about her.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    Susan: She lives next door and she is most definitely my heart. Jan
Comment from papa55mike
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Let's hope her spirit soars to the moon when the new space race heats up. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    Thanks so much, Mike. Jan
Comment from royowen
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She reminds me of my second grandson, Josiah, IQ 143, chess champion, followed his elder brother as school captain, both outstanding students, straight As, interested in astronomy, sport, God blesses the generations, an Abrahamic inheritance, dancing on the roof of your faith, I bathe in their reflected glory, as do you. Well done, love it. Best to your gifted granddaughter. "God's gifts are without repentance" "He gives good gifts to men" Romans 11: 29, Ephesians 4:8, Genesis 12:1, beautifully written, bless you, don't forget to laminate and frame this. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    Oh, for sure I will, Roy. Thanks so much! Jan
reply by royowen on 24-Feb-2021
    Good girl, your approval will be important to her later.
Comment from RetroStarfish
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What a wonderful acrostic! I know you must have put a lot of effort into each line, but in reading it, it flows so smoothly, effortlessly. And, I am left with a portrait of a smart and accomplished young lady.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much, Retrostarfish. Jan
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a prefect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
She having a good time and you are too. That is what proud grandmas do
Thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
    thanks so much, Cookie. Jan
reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 22-Feb-2021
    Your very welcome.
    Cookie
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'My Granddaughter, Alexis', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
    Thanks so much, duchess. I need to start working on it. Jan
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 22-Feb-2021

    Jan, you're more than welcome. You're writing brilliant pieces.
    the Duchess
Comment from Mastery
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Good job on this acrostic, Jan. I'll bet your Alexis is fun to be with. I love intelligent people, especially kids because we don't expect them to be our equals or smarter. If that makes sense. LOL God bless her. Is she a writer by chance, also? Bob

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
    Yes, she is Bob. She and I co-wrote a children's book a couple of years ago based on some freeplay she and I did when she was 6 that we developed into a faith-based book. She also does short stories and poems. She has quite the imagination. Jan
reply by Mastery on 22-Feb-2021
    Wow! I guess she does at that. :) Bob
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I feel Alexis has almost grown up with us following her growth. I know you were away for a while. I so enjoy reading about her. She's a remarkable young lady and you are blessed.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Yes, I am, especially since she lives next door. Rdfrdmom2
Comment from Jennifer L Newcomb
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Once again you have shared in a way that expresses what you feel and see in Alexis, that most grandmothers are looking through the same eyes. Relate( is short to me for relationships lol).

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Thank you, again, for this exceptional rating. I am humbled. Jan
Comment from Boogienights
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This is wonderful. I sense a future astronaut in the making. You sound like a very proud Grandma, as well you should. She sounds like an exceptional young lady. I really enjoyed your poem, thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Yes, she says if she can't be an astronaut, she wants to be an aeronautical engineer. Jan