Comment from elchupakabra

Excellent

I thought you did well to employ strong alliterations throughout to help the flow of this free verse acrostic. The imagery was strong and I loved the image you picked for the piece. Great work, thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest. Later daze.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Chupakabra,

Thanks again for a great review on my acrostic. Very much appreciated, sir.

Always,
Senyai

Comment from palmart

Excellent

Your poem is extremely descriptive on the colours that we can easily find on heaven! Clouds in all its shapes let us know how wide and infinite is the imagination of God! Great picture and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Palmart,

Oh, thank you so much for the excellent review and interesting critique of my acrostic. I have always loved watching clouds, especially those towering cumulus. They make the best pictures! They make me feel closer to God somehow as I witness his handwork ?

Have a great rest of your week :-)
Senyai

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Palmart,

Oh, thank you so much for the excellent review and interesting critique of my acrostic. I have always loved watching clouds, especially those towering cumulus. They make the best pictures! They make me feel closer to God somehow as I witness his handwork ?

Have a great rest of your week :-)
Senyai

reply by palmart on 30-Jun-2021

You`re welcome, Senyai! Cumulus are nice to view from Earth, but pilots hate them as they are wild storms that in case you enter into one....you may probably will not leave it "as one piece". But from a poetry point-of-view (and with feet on ground), thy are a nice show.

Have a wonderful day!

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021

Oh, I never thought about that! Hmm, they have thunderstorms and lightning in them then?

reply by palmart on 01-Jul-2021

Yes, Senyai!! The cotton-shaped clouds has vertical winds that are dangerous for any plane (even the bigger ones). But do not worry, pilots are well trained to face and overpass them. In airplanes, the weather forecast is key to decide the route to avoid any storm, If you have Cumulus nimbus, you simply change route (and add more fuel). Ships at sea faces the same and has the option of moving away from storms, but they canniot "fly away". Hahaha

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021

Hi Palmart,

Oh thanks for that great information on pilots avoiding flying through cumulus and cumulus nimbus. They look so innocent like puffs of whipped cream! But can wreck havoc. Good to know, thanks.

reply by palmart on 01-Jul-2021

Hi Senyai, A pleasure to share some knowledge!! Have a great time!!

God bless you!

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Some of the best things we see are free. Just look up to the sky, at the nature that surrounds us, at the beautiful lakes and rivers. You have captured that feeling in your poem. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Boogienights,

Yes, you nailed it! The best things are free. The clouds never charge for spectacular shows. So glad. Its freely given and spiritually nurturing.

Loved your review and critique of my little acrostic. Thank you!

Have a great rest of your week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Boogienights,

Yes, you nailed it! The best things are free. The clouds never charge for spectacular shows. So glad. Its freely given and spiritually nurturing.

Loved your review and critique of my little acrostic. Thank you!

Have a great rest of your week,
Senyai

Comment from Brenda Henderson

Excellent

Very nice. Cloud gazing can be an inspiring past time. Often adults are too busy and miss the show. Often children alone; with their innocence, imagination and awe get to witness and enjoy the show. The artwork chosen is exemplary and awe inspiring. Well done!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Brenda,

Thanks for such an interesting review on my little acrostic. I appreciate your comments and interesting take on my work!

Have a wonderful rest of your week ( can you believe its Wednesday already? :-(

Senyai :-)

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Brenda,

Thanks for such an interesting review on my little acrostic. I appreciate your comments and interesting take on my work!

Have a wonderful rest of your week ( can you believe its Wednesday already? :-(

Senyai :-)

reply by Brenda Henderson on 30-Jun-2021

You're Welcome

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and very well written acrostic poem about cloud pictures. You used very beautiful art work and very good descriptive words. I love looking at the clouds. They are beautiful! Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Teri,

So nice to meet you! Thank you kindly for an awesome review and interesting comments.

Have a great week,
Senyai

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Sunrise and sunset always seem more beautiful on the water in a boat. I like your images and metaphors in this nicely written acrostic.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest
Joan

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Joan,

Wow, what a complimentary review and interesting comments! Thank you so much. So glad my acrostic said something to you :-)

Have a great rest of your week ( sheez, can you believe its Wednesday already?) :-(

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Joan,

Wow, what a complimentary review and interesting comments! Thank you so much. So glad my acrostic said something to you :-)

Have a great rest of your week ( sheez, can you believe its Wednesday already?) :-(

Always,
Senyai

reply by dragonpoet on 30-Jun-2021

You're welcome, Senyai.
Same to you. Weeks seems to fly by.
Joan

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021

They really do fly by at mach speed these days :-)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Cloud Pictures
by Senyai

Great entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest. Who doesn't like gazing at the clouds? I used to do it more as a kid.

Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Gypsy,

Yes, I gazed at many clouds as a little one, even as a teen. Then I grew up and look down all the time, so I don?t trip over pitfalls and detours that come my way, lol. I have to remind myself, ?Look up, knot-head, look up!?

? and when I do, I?m usually glad I did :-)

Thanks most humbly, Gypsy for a super review and interesting thoughts.
Stay well, my friend.

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Gypsy,

Yes, I gazed at many clouds as a little one, even as a teen. Then I grew up and look down all the time, so I don?t trip over pitfalls and detours that come my way, lol. I have to remind myself, ?Look up, knot-head, look up!?

? and when I do, I?m usually glad I did :-)

Thanks most humbly, Gypsy for a super review and interesting thoughts.
Stay well, my friend.

Always,
Senyai

Comment from L. Kalere

Exceptional

Your acrostic carried me away, right up into those gorgeous clouds...one of my favorite subjects. Beautifully crafted, smooth as silk, fantastic imagery. One of the best I've read. Thank you for sharing your art with us.
Linda

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Linda,

Oh, thank you so very much for your superb review and sweet comments on my little acrostic.

Your gift of six stars made my day! I am in your debt :-)

Have a great rest of your week!
Senyai

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021

Hi Linda,

Oh, thank you so very much for your superb review and sweet comments on my little acrostic.

Your gift of six stars made my day! I am in your debt :-)

Have a great rest of your week!
Senyai

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

I too am a cloud watcher. It's amazing to see a heart morph into a dragon
or an angel. Your acrostic is really expressive and lovely. You have used an appealing array of vivid figures of speech.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Janice,

Thank you so much for your most wonderful review and enjoyable comments! I have always been a cloud gazer too and really love cumulus clouds as they make such magical worlds with their whipped cream puffs :-)

I really appreciate your time to read and critique my work.

Have a great rest of your week!
Senyai

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021

Hi Janice,

Thank you so much for your most wonderful review and enjoyable comments! I have always been a cloud gazer too and really love cumulus clouds as they make such magical worlds with their whipped cream puffs :-)

I really appreciate your time to read and critique my work.

Have a great rest of your week!
Senyai

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hello Senyai, a lovely acrostic on a fabulous subject. Cloud pictures - lovely - I see them every time there are clouds. Your lines, every one of them, are superb. 'Creative license is granted to this Sculptor of mist' - lovely. A well written, beautifully creative acrostic. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Dorothy,

What a lovely review and thoughts! I know, I love watching clouds drift in and out of pictures. That was a pastime of mine as a child.

Thank you for your enjoyable comments. So glad my poem said something to you.

Always,
Senyai