Ice Magician
Winter is a trickster -36 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Unknown writer of this mysterious Ice Man; of how his magical hand in the winter is not letting him preform his magical trick when, the whirlwinds whine briskly winds prevent him doing slight of hand in you 5-7-5 entry for the contest.
Gert
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Hello Unknown writer of this mysterious Ice Man; of how his magical hand in the winter is not letting him preform his magical trick when, the whirlwinds whine briskly winds prevent him doing slight of hand in you 5-7-5 entry for the contest.
Gert
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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You are most welcome
Gert
Comment from Bonnie Seach
This poem is compliant with contest requirements
The presentation is attractive and winning
The theme is subtle yet fitting
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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This poem is compliant with contest requirements
The presentation is attractive and winning
The theme is subtle yet fitting
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Comment from karenina
I like this very much dear author. There is a "slight of hand" in taking this out of the box approach to the theme that makes me smile. I do hope you are richly rewarded for your originality--fine image choses to accompany your poem as well!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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I like this very much dear author. There is a "slight of hand" in taking this out of the box approach to the theme that makes me smile. I do hope you are richly rewarded for your originality--fine image choses to accompany your poem as well!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Great poem! You're very welcome!
Karenina
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So good to hear from you, Karenina! Pray you are doing better lately ? hoping the new meds are working.
Sending love and hugs to you 🤗❤️
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Ice Magician
Nice entry for the Ode To Winter writing prompt. Good syllables count and presentation. I love the picture. A friend used it for his profile for a while. It's very creepy.
I would connect the lines grammatically to improve the flow.
whirlwinds whine briskly
as slight of hand bites briskly --
Ice Magician's call
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Ice Magician
Nice entry for the Ode To Winter writing prompt. Good syllables count and presentation. I love the picture. A friend used it for his profile for a while. It's very creepy.
I would connect the lines grammatically to improve the flow.
whirlwinds whine briskly
as slight of hand bites briskly --
Ice Magician's call
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual and inventive write as the magic of winter conjures up the ice and bitterly cold night winds here, there is a bite here that is slightly scary, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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An unusual and inventive write as the magic of winter conjures up the ice and bitterly cold night winds here, there is a bite here that is slightly scary, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your imaginative personification of winter as an "ice magician." Good use of alliteration in "whirlwinds whine" and "bites bitterly." Hope you do well in the contest.
One comment: In the second line, I think you mean "sleight of hand" not "slight." See https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/sleight-vs-slight-usage-legerdemain
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Enjoyed your imaginative personification of winter as an "ice magician." Good use of alliteration in "whirlwinds whine" and "bites bitterly." Hope you do well in the contest.
One comment: In the second line, I think you mean "sleight of hand" not "slight." See https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/sleight-vs-slight-usage-legerdemain
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
Comment from Patty Palmer
During winter weather, anything can happen unexpectedly. Power outages, people being stranded in their cars can starve or freeze to death while hoping for someone can rescue them. Winter's magic can be not so magical after all. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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During winter weather, anything can happen unexpectedly. Power outages, people being stranded in their cars can starve or freeze to death while hoping for someone can rescue them. Winter's magic can be not so magical after all. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
This is really great entry poet! Very, very unique.
Nice alliteration in whirlwinds whine and in bites bitterly.
Winter as an ice magician. It certainly can seem like that.
Great poem!
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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This is really great entry poet! Very, very unique.
Nice alliteration in whirlwinds whine and in bites bitterly.
Winter as an ice magician. It certainly can seem like that.
Great poem!
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very good entry for the 'ode to winter' 5-7-5 competition. I really like your artwork and presentation.
Good luck in the contest. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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This is a very good entry for the 'ode to winter' 5-7-5 competition. I really like your artwork and presentation.
Good luck in the contest. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
Comment from NABattaglia
I like the words you used to describe whirlwind and the cold. Solid writing and 5/7/5. This is a great entry and thank you for sharing this one. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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I like the words you used to describe whirlwind and the cold. Solid writing and 5/7/5. This is a great entry and thank you for sharing this one. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!
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Hello,
Thank you for an amazing review!