Oh, Crystal...
She did good.23 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Hahaha! You did it. This short 50 word story is creative and humorous. Crystal may have been ditzy, but she was also positive. Her first thoughts were about the planned entertainment, not the current fight. Great story. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
Hahaha! You did it. This short 50 word story is creative and humorous. Crystal may have been ditzy, but she was also positive. Her first thoughts were about the planned entertainment, not the current fight. Great story. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it:)
Comment from Shirley McLain
You gave me a good chuckle. I've played a ditz a time or two. You did a great job, and I liked your humorous post. Good luck in the contest, and have a great day. Shirley
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
You gave me a good chuckle. I've played a ditz a time or two. You did a great job, and I liked your humorous post. Good luck in the contest, and have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Shirley!!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
OMG...Crystal!!! I thing she is fit for the job, for sure. So much confidence and composure!!! I like the subtleness of the story.
I wish you good luck for the contest!!
mario
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
OMG...Crystal!!! I thing she is fit for the job, for sure. So much confidence and composure!!! I like the subtleness of the story.
I wish you good luck for the contest!!
mario
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Mario!
<3
Comment from JT traveller
Crystal did do good. I get the feeling you are Australian from your sense of humour and use of the term pub. Loved your story and your sense of humour. A fun read to start this morning. J
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
Crystal did do good. I get the feeling you are Australian from your sense of humour and use of the term pub. Loved your story and your sense of humour. A fun read to start this morning. J
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!! :)
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😊👍
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I loved this post as this girl remains professional even when there is a crisis going on! This post is funny and I am still laughing, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
Ha ha ha, I loved this post as this girl remains professional even when there is a crisis going on! This post is funny and I am still laughing, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a cute and creative short story. You have managed to tell a complete story with fifty words. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
This is a cute and creative short story. You have managed to tell a complete story with fifty words. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!
:)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a short short story that seems to qualify well for the humorous 50 word story prompt. It sounds like it could have been a 'blonde' joke, but there was no specification of hair color. Good luck in this contest!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
This is a short short story that seems to qualify well for the humorous 50 word story prompt. It sounds like it could have been a 'blonde' joke, but there was no specification of hair color. Good luck in this contest!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you! It appreciate your feedback!
Comment from Mary Shifman
Crystal's got her priorities straight--she's plugging the club. The policeman/policewoman should have been more explicit in his question! :)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
Crystal's got her priorities straight--she's plugging the club. The policeman/policewoman should have been more explicit in his question! :)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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lol for sure. Thank you for your feedback!!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Crystal is one smart lady. She has a quiet and quick sense of humor and knows how to hang on to her new job. A fun story. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
Crystal is one smart lady. She has a quiet and quick sense of humor and knows how to hang on to her new job. A fun story. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from RodG
I can easily visualize this scene at the pub where Ditzystarted her new job.
Great name chosen--Ditzy. She certainly acts that way when she responds to the police.
Great closer!
Rod
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
I can easily visualize this scene at the pub where Ditzystarted her new job.
Great name chosen--Ditzy. She certainly acts that way when she responds to the police.
Great closer!
Rod
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Rod!! :)