Misfortune
Contradicting cranes13 total reviews
Comment from BeyondtheShadows
Lovely poem. I am not overly familiar with the scheme of Japanese poetry,but I absolutely love your theme. You painted sorrow with your words. The angst of broken promises. Very beautiful.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
Lovely poem. I am not overly familiar with the scheme of Japanese poetry,but I absolutely love your theme. You painted sorrow with your words. The angst of broken promises. Very beautiful.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! <3
Comment from lancellot
Very nice free verse. Even with only a few lines, the reader get a good understanding of the emotions and the topic. A subject many have been through, sometimes more than once.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
Very nice free verse. Even with only a few lines, the reader get a good understanding of the emotions and the topic. A subject many have been through, sometimes more than once.
Well done.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Misfortune, has the proper formatting and finds the forlorn one, the winds beneath her wings blowing elsewhere, thought of only by other migrating friends. Nicely put together.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
This tanka, Misfortune, has the proper formatting and finds the forlorn one, the winds beneath her wings blowing elsewhere, thought of only by other migrating friends. Nicely put together.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you! I truly appreciate your thoughts.