What Then
Hatred is never the answer.12 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I loved your poetry. I usually give political things a wide pass. But, your poem was uniquely done. The "what if" certainly drew attention and focused your cause. Excellent use of your brain. Karen
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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I loved your poetry. I usually give political things a wide pass. But, your poem was uniquely done. The "what if" certainly drew attention and focused your cause. Excellent use of your brain. Karen
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Miss Karen. I thing this is more of a humanitarian piece than a political one. Still, probably to intense for the contest. I needed to slip in a cat or dog somewhere. HA!
You keep giving me anonymous Six Star Ratings like this and I am gonna start thinking that you like my writing.
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If I thought it was you, would it matter? Honestly , the only ones I can really tell are gypsy and dolly they have a repeated rarely varying type. When I write nostalgia people know me. When I write mystery a few know me, when I write faith or love, nobody knows me. Comedy, some know. i write a lot of different styles or at least I try to. My poetry is always a work in progress. I don't give 6's easily. You earned it.
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If I thought it was you, would it matter? Honestly , the only ones I can really tell are gypsy and dolly they have a repeated rarely varying type. When I write nostalgia people know me. When I write mystery a few know me, when I write faith or love, nobody knows me. Comedy, some know. i write a lot of different styles or at least I try to. My poetry is always a work in progress. I don't give 6's easily. You earned it.
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If I thought it was you, would it matter? Honestly , the only ones I can really tell are gypsy and dolly they have a repeated rarely varying type. When I write nostalgia people know me. When I write mystery a few know me, when I write faith or love, nobody knows me. Comedy, some know. i write a lot of different styles or at least I try to. My poetry is always a work in progress. I don't give 6's easily. You earned it.
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If I thought it was you, would it matter? Honestly , the only ones I can really tell are gypsy and dolly they have a repeated rarely varying type. When I write nostalgia people know me. When I write mystery a few know me, when I write faith or love, nobody knows me. Comedy, some know. i write a lot of different styles or at least I try to. My poetry is always a work in progress. I don't give 6's easily. You earned it.
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If I thought it was you, would it matter? Honestly , the only ones I can really tell are gypsy and dolly they have a repeated rarely varying type. When I write nostalgia people know me. When I write mystery a few know me, when I write faith or love, nobody knows me. Comedy, some know. i write a lot of different styles or at least I try to. My poetry is always a work in progress. I don't give 6's easily. You earned it.
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If I thought it was you, would it matter? Honestly , the only ones I can really tell are gypsy and dolly they have a repeated rarely varying type. When I write nostalgia people know me. When I write mystery a few know me, when I write faith or love, nobody knows me. Comedy, some know. i write a lot of different styles or at least I try to. My poetry is always a work in progress. I don't give 6's easily. You earned it.
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It?s better to get a six in secret like that because we are friends. I often recognize your writing because you and I have similar styles/minds.
Maybe you are my king lost sister?
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It?s better to get a six in secret like that because we are friends. I often recognize your writing because you and I have similar styles/minds.
Maybe you are my long lost sister?
Comment from JSD
Ok. Well I went for a humorous approach and then read yours. Well done on your obviously going to win poem. Your anger, your satire and the rhetorical style you adopt here are all brilliant. Well done. X
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Ok. Well I went for a humorous approach and then read yours. Well done on your obviously going to win poem. Your anger, your satire and the rhetorical style you adopt here are all brilliant. Well done. X
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Thank you, John! But no wins are guaranteed on Fanstory as you well know my friend. We shall see how it goes!