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At Home in Mississippi

Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Tidbits, Cures and Other Kids"
Growing up in the 40 and 50 in MIssissippi

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Comment from Wendy G
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A fun read, a humorous story, well written and interesting. I enjoyed reading about you early childhood, and I'm looking forward to the next.
Wendy Edits: last paragraph spelling of "revenge" and "already".

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 12-May-2024
    I'm glad you are finding something to laugh about in my stories. I always enjoy your comments.
    Beth
Comment from jim vecchio
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Wish I had six! I truly enjoyed this. It's funny how many of those old cures did work, and how many used food in their cure. I had to have an invasive procedure done in my home. My mother convinced me to have it by making me hot dog! Just one small concern, in your final paragraph, revenge is not spelled correctly.

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 10-May-2024
    Thank you Jim, I glad you enjoy my stories. I enjoy your comments on them.
    Beth
reply by jim vecchio on 10-May-2024
    Your writings always are worthy of acclaim.
Comment from patcelaw
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I have so much enjoyed listening to your stories of your young life. This one is no exception. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and look forward to reading more about your lovely life and how you grew up. Patricia .

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 10-May-2024
    Thank you/ Patricia. I 'm so glad you are enjoying them. All of our lives are different but some things remind us of our own experiencers.
    Beth
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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You have a fabulous memory. Great work putting them to paper.
"I've wrote that story in 2022, as to how this went down." - Maybe "I've written"?
we used to beg Mom to apply the Vicks 'after' we'd gone to sleep.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 12-May-2024
    Thank you Wayne. I hated the feel of the greesy stuff on my body. It smelled horrible and felt just as bad.
    Beth
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I'm going to look for that story in your portfolio, you've made me very curious now. These little stories are fabulous, Beth, memories from our childhood are so precious we must tell before we forget them. This was really good, I love the two toilet seats, I don't think I'd want to share my private moment with anyone else! LOL. Loved this, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

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 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 10-May-2024
    Thank you Sandra, It is good to know you like my stories of those early day. I enjoyed your comments.
    Beth
Comment from Begin Again
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Definitely a side to you that has been hidden well, Beth. I would never have guess you to be the "demon" child, plotting revenge. I am amazed at your total recall of the younger years. Awesome!

The font size is a little difficult to read lately. But I manage to get through it. Eye sight is failing even after surgery. Part of getting old I guess.
Smiles and Have a great day!
Carol

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 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Thank you Carol. I had changed to a larger font and then I lost it and had to redo it. I forgot about fixing the font. It is fixed now but too for you. I need the bigger type as well.
    Beth
reply by Begin Again on 08-May-2024
    Thanks so much, Beth. These old eyes strain hard enough these days... have a great day!