Care to dance, my love?
The Titanic lives on.17 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, the pomp and grandeur still go on, beautifully written, with the image of life still on the greatest voyage, your words paint a wonderful picture of the passengers' expectations, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Excellent, the pomp and grandeur still go on, beautifully written, with the image of life still on the greatest voyage, your words paint a wonderful picture of the passengers' expectations, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Hello friend. Many thanks for reading. So glad you enjoyed. Not easy to write a story in 75 words. Blessings, K xx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, who knows sweetie pie...I do believe in spirits...
you do have an amazing imagination my wonderful friend...
this is pretty cool...I can just picture people sitting around
in the classy dining room and talking at each other...
very clever you...
I love your Flash Fiction story told...I wish you all the luck in the
contest...very well thought of...and very well written...
much love to you and Benny...Linda xxoo
I'll email you on what the doctor said...xxoo
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Hi Kace, who knows sweetie pie...I do believe in spirits...
you do have an amazing imagination my wonderful friend...
this is pretty cool...I can just picture people sitting around
in the classy dining room and talking at each other...
very clever you...
I love your Flash Fiction story told...I wish you all the luck in the
contest...very well thought of...and very well written...
much love to you and Benny...Linda xxoo
I'll email you on what the doctor said...xxoo
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Hello Linda Louie, Good to see you back online. Thanks for reading my friend. How goes your new computer? Love, Kace.
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it doesn't go...I'll call them on the
29th...can't wait to get away from them...much like the laptop they
sent me...got it one day...mailed it back the next day...
always welcome sweetie pie...love xxoo 🤗💝😊🌼🙏🌺
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Can you use the free computer at the Library? Or don't you have such?
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh my gosh, Kace, my talented friend, this is wonderful. I love your little flash fiction as you nailed what these people were probably acting like at the time when it sank, but the ghosts that didn't learn how to not be snobs even after all those years. I love it. I wish I had a ten star to award you for this awesome post. Please accept my virtual six instead. Congrats on well deserved should be win. And if you don't, then maybe the judges have been hangin with some of those ghosts too. LOL
This was SWEET, my friend. Positively awesome. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Oh my gosh, Kace, my talented friend, this is wonderful. I love your little flash fiction as you nailed what these people were probably acting like at the time when it sank, but the ghosts that didn't learn how to not be snobs even after all those years. I love it. I wish I had a ten star to award you for this awesome post. Please accept my virtual six instead. Congrats on well deserved should be win. And if you don't, then maybe the judges have been hangin with some of those ghosts too. LOL
This was SWEET, my friend. Positively awesome. Love, Debi
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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G'Day Debi, Many thanks for your great review. It's hard to tell a story in 75 words! Love to you, Kace xx
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well this is a clever little flash! What a scene you paint of glamour and opulence before your twist at the end that these folk are mere ghosts of the past aboard the Titanic. Your imagination, Kay, knows no bounds! A lovely post and a strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Well this is a clever little flash! What a scene you paint of glamour and opulence before your twist at the end that these folk are mere ghosts of the past aboard the Titanic. Your imagination, Kay, knows no bounds! A lovely post and a strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Hello Debbie, Many thanks for your great review. I found it hard to put a story like that in 75 words. I would have liked to take you on a tour of the ship. Love, Kay xx
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very cleverly written flash fiction and I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day. Patricia .
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This is a very cleverly written flash fiction and I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day. Patricia .
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Hello my friend, and many thanks for reading and enjoying. It's hard to put a story into 75 words! Love, Kay.
Comment from BethShelby
This is good flash. It is probably close to the way extremely rich people think. If it doesn't pretain to them or what they might want to do, then it is of to importance to them.
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reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This is good flash. It is probably close to the way extremely rich people think. If it doesn't pretain to them or what they might want to do, then it is of to importance to them.
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Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Yes, their world is of the rich and nothing else matters. I'm glad you liked my 75 words. K xx
Comment from Sanku
Beautifully crafted .The short story captured my interest with the the picture of Titanc and I was wondering what is going to happen ...Everytime I read something about theis great ship tragedy I trwould about the passengers...some ghosts linger it would seem...
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reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Beautifully crafted .The short story captured my interest with the the picture of Titanc and I was wondering what is going to happen ...Everytime I read something about theis great ship tragedy I trwould about the passengers...some ghosts linger it would seem...
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Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Yes, it was some tragedy and it's true when an incident like the sinking happens. The ghosts linger where they last were. Thank you. K xx