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Comment from zaraduck6
This was a beautiful and captivating poem. It captured the beauty of nature. I love the free-verse, it really felt free. And also love all the literary devices. And of course, the color scheme really added to it, as well as all lower-case letters and beautiful imagery displayed. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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This was a beautiful and captivating poem. It captured the beauty of nature. I love the free-verse, it really felt free. And also love all the literary devices. And of course, the color scheme really added to it, as well as all lower-case letters and beautiful imagery displayed. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Zaraduck6. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That is a the great thing about the soul - it is free to be in sea or sky and be adorned with beautiful garb that's unseen by human eyes. And yet, you give us a glimpse of what the Lord sees in us here.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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That is a the great thing about the soul - it is free to be in sea or sky and be adorned with beautiful garb that's unseen by human eyes. And yet, you give us a glimpse of what the Lord sees in us here.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Big Sister, I wish you a wonderful weekend.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from royowen
This is superbly written Gypsy, your grasp of language to paint a canvas and create images to colour the picture that you paint, this is beautifully presented in great language and poise, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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This is superbly written Gypsy, your grasp of language to paint a canvas and create images to colour the picture that you paint, this is beautifully presented in great language and poise, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
do you notice
when the northerly wind kisses your cheeks
Yes! It's magical! Just like the poem! I love this qll the way through. All the best going forward.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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do you notice
when the northerly wind kisses your cheeks
Yes! It's magical! Just like the poem! I love this qll the way through. All the best going forward.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Nicole. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
A poem of love in my feeling, a deep one expressed through nature or natueal allterations. The dreamy tone, sets the mood for wondering, as the mind wanders to the places and circumstances which you have described. I had forgotten about the Tasman Sea, as it is often just overshadowed by the vastness of the Pacific. Little details like this, makes it so special.
RJ
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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A poem of love in my feeling, a deep one expressed through nature or natueal allterations. The dreamy tone, sets the mood for wondering, as the mind wanders to the places and circumstances which you have described. I had forgotten about the Tasman Sea, as it is often just overshadowed by the vastness of the Pacific. Little details like this, makes it so special.
RJ
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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You?re welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Where My Soul Soars, takes the readers on a magical transcending flight through the ethereal cosmos and nearer as well. within the perimeters of the perceived world.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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This free verse, Where My Soul Soars, takes the readers on a magical transcending flight through the ethereal cosmos and nearer as well. within the perimeters of the perceived world.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is beautifully presented and delightfully versed, Gypsy! It's dream-like quality charms the reader on this little journey. I love the second stanza in particular with the crescent moon tilting on its back and the way the ocean meets the sky to lift the soul. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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This is beautifully presented and delightfully versed, Gypsy! It's dream-like quality charms the reader on this little journey. I love the second stanza in particular with the crescent moon tilting on its back and the way the ocean meets the sky to lift the soul. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
