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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi, Gypsy. I hope you are well

So, you like Bards. You are their muse. Shakespeare was a bard. Some of his poetry is the best ever written

Maybe you were his muse back then because muses live forever. If one writer dies, they just find a new bard.

I wonder if bards and muses ever have love affairs. The Muse in this poem is talking about how much she loves the bard

I'm being silly now. Seriously, I probably have a muse. But she lives inside my mind

From the poem. It looks like he is just as smitten with her as she is with him

I really liked your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.




 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Pam. It's a funny and silly poem... hopefully to make readers smile. LoL

    Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, I Have a Thing for Bards, has then proper formatting and keeps the poets in line as they certainly want to be wanted by as many bard babes as possible.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Bill

    Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Oh another of your handsome friends, this time a bard! This is all a bit greedy now. Will there be any left for me? And you're the muse now! Well, as you say, a demanding job but someone's got to do it. But can I be next in line:)) I'm off to bed now to dream on.... Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
    Hahaha... I will share with you.

    Thank you very much,

    Gypsy
Comment from jim vecchio
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I'm a PARD, my formerly long hair grows now mainly on my chest, offkey is my best music, I sigh and look sleepy all the time. Sorry, that's the best I can do!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
    Hahaha, I love your sense of humor.

    Thank you very much, my friend. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
reply by jim vecchio on 22-Jun-2024
    You, too, and thanks for understanding my kidding around.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
    I love a good sense of humor, it's as good as long hair and a tan. LoL
reply by jim vecchio on 23-Jun-2024
    My wife used to call me "Esau" after the hairy man in the Bible. But lots of that stuff has gone South along with me.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a fun read. It sounds like you found a winner--in the artwork, at least. I like the line: Gypsy is the muse of his poetic romance
The art makes it look like this young man also is artistic with possible foreign influence of some kind. Maybe it is calligraphy he is also practicing.

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, my friend. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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My uses for most men have moved from the bedroom to yard work or home repair. Lol. He did sound easy on the eyes. Lol. This was a very fun piece of poetry. I enjoyed reading. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
    LoL I am glad you felt the humor.. it's a very silly poem. But I do like men with long hair.... sigh...

    Thank you very much. I am grateful for your wonderful review and feedback.

    Gypsy