Unfinished Brushstrokes
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Unfinished Brushstrokes - Chap 4"story of love, loss, new beginnings and secrets.
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Comment from Wendy G
Jackson has landed them in a pickle, andnow it seems his folly has played right into the hands of an international gang of art thieves. Dylan will be a capable help in solving everything, but I sense that each of the family members of Eleanor has something to hide, and issues to work through, and there might not be much cooperation in their tasks let alone in trying to redeem Eleanor's painting. Fascinating. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Jackson has landed them in a pickle, andnow it seems his folly has played right into the hands of an international gang of art thieves. Dylan will be a capable help in solving everything, but I sense that each of the family members of Eleanor has something to hide, and issues to work through, and there might not be much cooperation in their tasks let alone in trying to redeem Eleanor's painting. Fascinating. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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They will definitely struggle with trying to change their ways.Hopefully, they will succeed but I'm not sure about that one.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
There is a lot of mystery here. I'm not sure which artist did the painting that is missing. I see you work spacing looks right not. Have they fixed the problem or did what I suggested for you to do work?
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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There is a lot of mystery here. I'm not sure which artist did the painting that is missing. I see you work spacing looks right not. Have they fixed the problem or did what I suggested for you to do work?
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thanks to you, not anyone else. thanks and more thanks! It's a lot of work to eliminate, save, post and then fix the paragraphs but at least it worked. I imagine I will have to do it to every chapter until someone gets it fixed.
thanks for the help and for the review.
Smiles, Carol
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I wonder if it is doing it in the basic setting. I always use advanced but I don't think everyone is having a problem.
Comment from Teri7
This is a really great chapter that is very interesting with very descriptive words and very good dialogue. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Sounds like it will be a fun and interesting read my friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is a really great chapter that is very interesting with very descriptive words and very good dialogue. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Sounds like it will be a fun and interesting read my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I hope you continue to read and enjoy. I appreciate your comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Yay! The formatting is working fine!
(smile)
Oh...well now I'm tied in knots already. So Charles and Eleanor both painted...and is it truly Charles' painting, or (in the wily ways of love) did they both paint the same scene?
Sounds like we know Jackson is not the murderer. (Although he's not the brightest bulb on the tree when it comes to choosing who should repair/restore paintings!)
LOL -- See? You get me so "into" your chapters I'm recapping them to YOU!
OBVIOUSLY -- I'm loving it!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Yay! The formatting is working fine!
(smile)
Oh...well now I'm tied in knots already. So Charles and Eleanor both painted...and is it truly Charles' painting, or (in the wily ways of love) did they both paint the same scene?
Sounds like we know Jackson is not the murderer. (Although he's not the brightest bulb on the tree when it comes to choosing who should repair/restore paintings!)
LOL -- See? You get me so "into" your chapters I'm recapping them to YOU!
OBVIOUSLY -- I'm loving it!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Obviously, I adore your smiling face and awesome reviews as well. Can't wait till you read Chap. 5 and 6. Mighty interesting things unfolding.
Love you, Carol
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I'm going to try review your latest now...
(If nobody calls me for "help" --LOL)
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Help!.......LOL
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Heh heh. The PHONE rang and I ignored it. I HAD to review your two latest chapters!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I figured Jackson had done something with some painting. Now the plot gets thicker. I love the story.
"But Jackson, if we wait and someone else discovers it is missing, they'll think we took it."
"I did!" (two different dialogues, you need a line space between them)
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I figured Jackson had done something with some painting. Now the plot gets thicker. I love the story.
"But Jackson, if we wait and someone else discovers it is missing, they'll think we took it."
"I did!" (two different dialogues, you need a line space between them)
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I'm having site trouble but I hope these are getting to you. Thank you again for all the kind remarks, the support, and for enjoying the story.
Smiles, Carol
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I'm having site problems too. GRRR
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I wonder what's happening? I've had to erase my entire stories and start over and when I fix things or send something, it doesn't happen. Ugh!
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It's taking forever for my reviews to save. I've gotten to where I copy them in case I lose it.
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Good idea!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, this is a turn-up. First Jackson confesses about the painting that was ruined, and how he is being charged more, but when he went to see the person who is supposed to be repairing it, he's gone. Not good. Then the artist reporting his stolen art. I can't see Eleanor being a thief, and I hope they don't accuse her, even though she is dead. I'm sure her ghost would have something to say about that. You've stirred the plot up very well, my clever friend. Now I wait for a short while to get the next part. Love and hugs, my dear friend. :))Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Well, this is a turn-up. First Jackson confesses about the painting that was ruined, and how he is being charged more, but when he went to see the person who is supposed to be repairing it, he's gone. Not good. Then the artist reporting his stolen art. I can't see Eleanor being a thief, and I hope they don't accuse her, even though she is dead. I'm sure her ghost would have something to say about that. You've stirred the plot up very well, my clever friend. Now I wait for a short while to get the next part. Love and hugs, my dear friend. :))Sandra xx
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I don't know what's happening with this site but I'm sure I read and answered this yesterday....Did the same thing with Barbara's too. So I will politely tell you how thankful I am that you are reading and enjoying my story. Hope I can keep surprising you!
Smiles, Carol