Papa Joey
A 75-word story15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-five-word story, Papa Joey, has the proper word count and makes the cute observation that sometimes we can't get blood from a turnip or a kitten from a dog.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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This seventy-five-word story, Papa Joey, has the proper word count and makes the cute observation that sometimes we can't get blood from a turnip or a kitten from a dog.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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So true. Thanks for sharing my story, Bill.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. This is funny. You story did a great interpretation of this well-known Normal Rockwell painting. Maybe in the future, you can get a a cat out of a dog using genetic engineering.
Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Haha. This is funny. You story did a great interpretation of this well-known Normal Rockwell painting. Maybe in the future, you can get a a cat out of a dog using genetic engineering.
Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Many thanks for your review. I am delighted my shortie gave you pleasure.
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, fortunately we've owned 22 cats and five dogs during our married life, all except one were strays that wheedled their way into our hearts, the Surviving one is a very cute Moodle dog, beautifully written, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Heh heh, fortunately we've owned 22 cats and five dogs during our married life, all except one were strays that wheedled their way into our hearts, the Surviving one is a very cute Moodle dog, beautifully written, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. Glad I could make you chuckle.
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Well done
Comment from bhogg
I didn't count the words, but I would bet seventy-five. A cute story accompanied by appropriate artwork. Good luck in the contest. I was planning on entering, but I could never tell the story I wanted with so few words!
Bill
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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I didn't count the words, but I would bet seventy-five. A cute story accompanied by appropriate artwork. Good luck in the contest. I was planning on entering, but I could never tell the story I wanted with so few words!
Bill
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review, Bill. Flash fiction is challenging, but if you keep trying the right words will come.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This cute flash fiction story is clever and humorous. Stories about children's understanding or misunderstanding always makes for a great story, especially when it produces a chuckle at the end. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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This cute flash fiction story is clever and humorous. Stories about children's understanding or misunderstanding always makes for a great story, especially when it produces a chuckle at the end. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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I am delighted my shortie made you chuckle. Many thanks for your kind praise.