Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from royowen
I think Eleanor could a most save the victims of kidnapping, and particularly Megan on her own, the culprits would be visited by a spook in their useless lives, but I think she will collude with the police in the rescue, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I think Eleanor could a most save the victims of kidnapping, and particularly Megan on her own, the culprits would be visited by a spook in their useless lives, but I think she will collude with the police in the rescue, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Eleanor is trying real hard to do things she's never experienced before and I think it's opening her up to see people and her family better as well. Thanks for reading this chapter, Roy! Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
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Everybody gains
Comment from Esther Brown
Way to go. Charming complicated characters, ladies in danger, criminals showing two sides (that is a specialty of yours I have noticed). You don't waste time in describing unnecessary details and carry the twisting plots on action and conversation. Great job Carol. Esther
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Way to go. Charming complicated characters, ladies in danger, criminals showing two sides (that is a specialty of yours I have noticed). You don't waste time in describing unnecessary details and carry the twisting plots on action and conversation. Great job Carol. Esther
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Made me smile again as usual! One, thank you for the awesome review and stars and two, for seeing my characters as I see them. I think some where deep inside everyone has some good. It might not always get displayed, but it's there. Thanks for being you and for the wonderful smile.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
That went down smoother that I'd anticipated. I guess you're determind to get this book finished in time to win the contest. I'm wondering what else Eleanor is going to do. She had an advantage over the others because they can't kill her and they can only see her if she wants them too.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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That went down smoother that I'd anticipated. I guess you're determind to get this book finished in time to win the contest. I'm wondering what else Eleanor is going to do. She had an advantage over the others because they can't kill her and they can only see her if she wants them too.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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The judge isn't giving up quite so easily. He thinks Megan is his ace in the hole and that he can convince Margaret that they are lying about him. Of course, he hasn't met the likes of Eleanor yet either. There's quite a bit more to happen.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
OH man, isn't it always the way? Is the crooked judge INSULTED that someone would play him? That's precious! So cool to have four chapters waiting for me to read when I signed on today. (Thanks to being too exhausted to read last night)--
Eleanor is the most resourceful ghost ever and you are such a master at dialogue (along with everything else!)--
I'm feeling so smart -- for being one of your fans!
(Probably the best choice I ever made!)
You're going to finish this within the allotted month without question!
(And QUALITY is never compromised when you're at the keyboard!)
Yay, Carol!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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OH man, isn't it always the way? Is the crooked judge INSULTED that someone would play him? That's precious! So cool to have four chapters waiting for me to read when I signed on today. (Thanks to being too exhausted to read last night)--
Eleanor is the most resourceful ghost ever and you are such a master at dialogue (along with everything else!)--
I'm feeling so smart -- for being one of your fans!
(Probably the best choice I ever made!)
You're going to finish this within the allotted month without question!
(And QUALITY is never compromised when you're at the keyboard!)
Yay, Carol!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I wish I was Eleanor and could pop in and give you the biggest hug right now. You know the right things to say to lift my spirits and make me feel good about what I do. I tried to mention my story to a few family members but not much reaction. Such is life.
smiles and hugs, Carol
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Meh! Family members are great for telling you supper was awesome! Other writers telling you you're awesome makes a LOT more sense!
(LOL)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Eleanor got what was needed to save Megan. I hope they get to the girls in time. I also hope they can get to her in time. Doyle's going to continue to be a pain, but we've got him. Great write.
Garth had a sharp comeback, but inside his head, he heard Eleanor telling him to be nice. He inhaled and smiled. "Sure, Donatelli, we'll all belong to the best friend's club." (CUTE!!!!!!)
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Eleanor got what was needed to save Megan. I hope they get to the girls in time. I also hope they can get to her in time. Doyle's going to continue to be a pain, but we've got him. Great write.
Garth had a sharp comeback, but inside his head, he heard Eleanor telling him to be nice. He inhaled and smiled. "Sure, Donatelli, we'll all belong to the best friend's club." (CUTE!!!!!!)
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Eleanor has a way with these men, smiles!
Thanks so much for reading another chapter. There's a few more surprises along the way that I hope you will enjoy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
You're on a roll, writing. So am I, reading. You're definitely going to make it to the finish line by the end of the month. Reading the artwork exchange with all the key players on the scene, was like watching a movie. I mentally cheered when Doyle was taken away.
Eleanor was dressed as a nurse in Nick's room. When she got the information she was looking for, she left. I just hope he didn't need a nightshift nurse to be available, since the real nurse was sent home.
Another remarkable, action packed chapter.
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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You're on a roll, writing. So am I, reading. You're definitely going to make it to the finish line by the end of the month. Reading the artwork exchange with all the key players on the scene, was like watching a movie. I mentally cheered when Doyle was taken away.
Eleanor was dressed as a nurse in Nick's room. When she got the information she was looking for, she left. I just hope he didn't need a nightshift nurse to be available, since the real nurse was sent home.
Another remarkable, action packed chapter.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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That was the day shift nurse...the night shift is still handing around.... just not in Nick's room. LOL
Thanks for continuing to keep up with me and be a solid cheering section. I just told Karenina I should start a series with Garth and Eleanor as his sidekick. Wouldn't that be a riot!!
Smiles, Carol