The Coyote Boys
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Rotten Eggs"Story about two brothers who change their destiny.
19 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
As one of those boys who was always into something, whose mind and body churned like a maggot, more times than not into trouble, I certainly enjoy reading about Huck and Dewey. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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As one of those boys who was always into something, whose mind and body churned like a maggot, more times than not into trouble, I certainly enjoy reading about Huck and Dewey. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying this. And thank you for the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
Dewey is thinking seriously about getting rid of his daddy. Huck might not care what happens to his daddy but he is afriaid for Dewey. He says his daddy won't fight fair. I'm not sure if he is afraid his father will kill Dewey or if he is aftraid Dewey might be put away for kill his daddy. Huck may be ready to kill him if he finds out about the secret. I"m enjoying you story.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Dewey is thinking seriously about getting rid of his daddy. Huck might not care what happens to his daddy but he is afriaid for Dewey. He says his daddy won't fight fair. I'm not sure if he is afraid his father will kill Dewey or if he is aftraid Dewey might be put away for kill his daddy. Huck may be ready to kill him if he finds out about the secret. I"m enjoying you story.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Beth. I think Huck is scared Dewey might wind up like their father. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhhh, these boys have my Worry Meter in the danger zone a little bit more every week. This has the Of Mice and Men feel to it, and we know how dangerous that turned out!! Oy.
Nicely written. Some inner thoughts revealed, some secrets alluded to, some suspicions confirmed. Yep, this one had it all!! Very nice work. Keep 'em coming!
xoxox
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Ohhhh, these boys have my Worry Meter in the danger zone a little bit more every week. This has the Of Mice and Men feel to it, and we know how dangerous that turned out!! Oy.
Nicely written. Some inner thoughts revealed, some secrets alluded to, some suspicions confirmed. Yep, this one had it all!! Very nice work. Keep 'em coming!
xoxox
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle. .I'm glad you enjoyed this. There is no happy endings in stories like this. I appreciate the detailed review and the extra star. Gretchen
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It's so true. Ugh.
Comment from tfawcus
Great tension between the two boys here. The emotions seethe below the surface, bubbling up from time to time. It sounds as though Dewey's going to get himself into a heap of trouble if Huck doesn't stop him.
You must tell me sometime how to tell a good egg from a rotten one - before it's broken, that is.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Great tension between the two boys here. The emotions seethe below the surface, bubbling up from time to time. It sounds as though Dewey's going to get himself into a heap of trouble if Huck doesn't stop him.
You must tell me sometime how to tell a good egg from a rotten one - before it's broken, that is.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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My grandfather said rotten ones feel like rocks. Don't know if he was telling me the truth or not. Lol. Thank you so much for this awesome review and the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
Poor Huck he is struggling with his infatuation for Miss Lynn.Dew seems sensible. He harbours z ot of resentment against his father ..I care for these two and hope fervently sonething. Good will happen to them
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Poor Huck he is struggling with his infatuation for Miss Lynn.Dew seems sensible. He harbours z ot of resentment against his father ..I care for these two and hope fervently sonething. Good will happen to them
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you like the brothers and that you care for them. I appreciate this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like there is some trouble brewing as their could be some revenge on the cards and maybe someone will be taught a lesson. As always, I enjoyed the authentic dialogue and how this story is progressing, a joy to read Gretchen, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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It sounds like there is some trouble brewing as their could be some revenge on the cards and maybe someone will be taught a lesson. As always, I enjoyed the authentic dialogue and how this story is progressing, a joy to read Gretchen, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Dolly. I'm so glad you are still enjoying this. I appreciate your support in this story. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice written story and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your sentence structure your paragraph in and your presentation is very well done. Have a good week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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This is a very nice written story and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your sentence structure your paragraph in and your presentation is very well done. Have a good week. Patricia.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Patricia. I appreciate your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I'm thinkin' Dewey is right.
Nicely written. Error free as near as I can tell.
Don't know why Huck would do Dewey thata way with the rotten egg, though.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I'm thinkin' Dewey is right.
Nicely written. Error free as near as I can tell.
Don't know why Huck would do Dewey thata way with the rotten egg, though.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Boys will be boys. I still shoot my coworkers with rubber bands. Lol. Thank you for this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Barry Penfold
Good dialogue and interesting setting. Seems as though Miss Lynn will feature quite a bit in the future episodes. Huck will not forget her. Thanks for sharing. I will keep an eye on the progress of the story.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Good dialogue and interesting setting. Seems as though Miss Lynn will feature quite a bit in the future episodes. Huck will not forget her. Thanks for sharing. I will keep an eye on the progress of the story.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Gretchen