Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Morning Sunshine"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from lyenochka
You have such a way of making us root for Miranda! And even though her life is not like ours, still we can completely relate to her roller coaster of feelings - of maternal love for Waylon, of suspicion of the new teacher, and the outrage at Dougie to show up unconcerned after all the worry he caused.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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You have such a way of making us root for Miranda! And even though her life is not like ours, still we can completely relate to her roller coaster of feelings - of maternal love for Waylon, of suspicion of the new teacher, and the outrage at Dougie to show up unconcerned after all the worry he caused.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I think we all have Miranda days. I know I do. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from jmdg1954
So, I've not read about Miranda in any previous posts (chapters) so this is all new to me.
With that said, you did lay some groundwork for a newbie to jump in. I'll just have to be alert in future posts to pick up any pertinent past info.
I'm liking the character of Miranda in these first two posts and looking for more.
Thanks,
John
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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So, I've not read about Miranda in any previous posts (chapters) so this is all new to me.
With that said, you did lay some groundwork for a newbie to jump in. I'll just have to be alert in future posts to pick up any pertinent past info.
I'm liking the character of Miranda in these first two posts and looking for more.
Thanks,
John
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much, John. Miranda is one of the most fun characters that has ever come to me. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm curious about the teacher and I'm curious why Dougie is back. More importantly way is he back. I'm in agreement with Miranda. How's this going to affect Waylon. It's not fair to him. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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I'm curious about the teacher and I'm curious why Dougie is back. More importantly way is he back. I'm in agreement with Miranda. How's this going to affect Waylon. It's not fair to him. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Barbara. Dougie has his reasons for coming back now. That will be revealed soon. Appreciate this. Gretchen
Comment from Jacob1395
That's a great line to end the chapter on. You've left me wondering just what he's going to do now he's found out that Dougie is alive. I thought you did a great job with the dialogue in this piece and I thought your chapter flowed really well. I'm looking forward to reading the next part.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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That's a great line to end the chapter on. You've left me wondering just what he's going to do now he's found out that Dougie is alive. I thought you did a great job with the dialogue in this piece and I thought your chapter flowed really well. I'm looking forward to reading the next part.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sounds like things are about to fly out of control in all different directions. And I can hardly wait to see Miranda on the war path, snatching all their butts into order. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Sounds like things are about to fly out of control in all different directions. And I can hardly wait to see Miranda on the war path, snatching all their butts into order. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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She will definitely be kicking ass and taking names. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A welcome catch-up with Miranda. As though we've never been away. Same old lovable feistiness and close bond with Waylon. And now we know for sure that Dougie is alive and well but Miranda isn't celebrating. She's also, I'm sure, going to have many more confrontations with old Lemonface. We've a lot in store here, Gretchen, and you hit the ground running. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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A welcome catch-up with Miranda. As though we've never been away. Same old lovable feistiness and close bond with Waylon. And now we know for sure that Dougie is alive and well but Miranda isn't celebrating. She's also, I'm sure, going to have many more confrontations with old Lemonface. We've a lot in store here, Gretchen, and you hit the ground running. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Debbie. Miranda doesn't ease into things, she just jumps in. Lol. Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
It is good to have Miranda back. She a tough one. She not taking any grief form anyone but she does have soft heart for Waylon and losing him isn't going happen easily. Also the lemonface at school isn't going to get to her either. I enjoy all your stories.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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It is good to have Miranda back. She a tough one. She not taking any grief form anyone but she does have soft heart for Waylon and losing him isn't going happen easily. Also the lemonface at school isn't going to get to her either. I enjoy all your stories.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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She really isn't satisfied unless she has a ton of things going on in her life. Lol. Soon, she'll be juggling trouble. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an outstanding mixture of unpleasantness and shock, with excellent character development. You use action in the chapter to good effect to move the story on. kay
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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This is an outstanding mixture of unpleasantness and shock, with excellent character development. You use action in the chapter to good effect to move the story on. kay
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Kay. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Miranda is quite a character. Thank you for this extra star. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Waylon is old enough to make his own choice where he wants to stay. Plus, he could file to be released from his father, to be legally seen as an adult. Dougie is a slimy virus. He gobbles up everything in his path with no regard or feeling for what anybody else feels or thinks. Even so, she cannot be the one to turn him in. Waylon might blame her later. :-( Karen
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Waylon is old enough to make his own choice where he wants to stay. Plus, he could file to be released from his father, to be legally seen as an adult. Dougie is a slimy virus. He gobbles up everything in his path with no regard or feeling for what anybody else feels or thinks. Even so, she cannot be the one to turn him in. Waylon might blame her later. :-( Karen
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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You're exactly right. Miranda has to tread carefully now, and that's not exactly her strong suit. Lol. Thanks fir this nice review. Gretchen
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You were right when you said, the lazy river is gonna get wild, you weren't joking, were you?
I don't like that teacher, and my son had one just like him, always picking on him, until I went and sorted him out. I hope Rita can find some dirt on him, so Miranda can go after him.
Now, what does Dougie want? You don't pretend to be dead for a couple of years then turn up as if all is fine with the world. I'm sure he's after something. Just so long as he doesn't upset Waylon again!! Great start, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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You were right when you said, the lazy river is gonna get wild, you weren't joking, were you?
I don't like that teacher, and my son had one just like him, always picking on him, until I went and sorted him out. I hope Rita can find some dirt on him, so Miranda can go after him.
Now, what does Dougie want? You don't pretend to be dead for a couple of years then turn up as if all is fine with the world. I'm sure he's after something. Just so long as he doesn't upset Waylon again!! Great start, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Oh, you know Dougie very well. He caught wind of something. Lol. Thank you fir this. Gretchen