Spirited Justice
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know my hero with be there to help these girls and find the truth. In the long run he'll help Matthew too. I know he will. This is a good write.
Eleanor's voice rose a bit as if she was distraught. "Oh dear! (distraught,)
Eleanor interrupted him. "Here to see Garth. (him,)
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I know my hero with be there to help these girls and find the truth. In the long run he'll help Matthew too. I know he will. This is a good write.
Eleanor's voice rose a bit as if she was distraught. "Oh dear! (distraught,)
Eleanor interrupted him. "Here to see Garth. (him,)
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Good morning, Barbara! I knew you'd love seeing the Cowboy return..even is he's having some "down time". But Eleanor will get him going again. Thanks for the support and review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes, trying to do and say the right things doesn't come easy. And steadfast thoughts waver like a Styrofoam cup struggling to stay afloat in a tempestuous sea. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Sometimes, trying to do and say the right things doesn't come easy. And steadfast thoughts waver like a Styrofoam cup struggling to stay afloat in a tempestuous sea. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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As always, you are too ogood to me. Thnk you for the stars and your kindness. This chapter was a bit emotional but I have to get sloppy sometimes. LOL Glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Awesome chapter. That Eleanor is quickly becoming my favorite character. She is quite dramatic and I love it. I think I ever become a ghost I will take the dramatic route as well. Great job, Carol.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Awesome chapter. That Eleanor is quickly becoming my favorite character. She is quite dramatic and I love it. I think I ever become a ghost I will take the dramatic route as well. Great job, Carol.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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yES, I would love to be Eleanor, whipping around th world in a flash and popping in unexpected. Besides she's got a heart of gold. thank you for loving my favorite character.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Another excellent chapter. Eleanor is a good and kind person, eg with the man in the alley, but she is also very insightful and astute, and both Garth and Donatelli need her to get them going again, and to help them work as a team. Well written.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Another excellent chapter. Eleanor is a good and kind person, eg with the man in the alley, but she is also very insightful and astute, and both Garth and Donatelli need her to get them going again, and to help them work as a team. Well written.
Wendy
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Yes, Eleanor will have her hands full with Garth and Donatelli...like spoiled children, but I don't fear that she's up to the job. thank you so much, Wendy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved the scene showing Eleanor with Poppa, I could really see his confusion at seeing her, especially as he thought she was dead. But I loved how calmly she told him that she now helps out with the FBI. That would certainly be something to try and get your head around. Another excellent, engaging chapter Carol. I really enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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I loved the scene showing Eleanor with Poppa, I could really see his confusion at seeing her, especially as he thought she was dead. But I loved how calmly she told him that she now helps out with the FBI. That would certainly be something to try and get your head around. Another excellent, engaging chapter Carol. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Jacob! Garth has been a fixture in many of my stories and the readers always want him to come back. He's the charming Texan Cowboy.... but I decided to add a bit of 'weakness' to his persona with the loss of Allie (also from other books). Of course, it's only a momentary relapse.... I've got to get him back in the saddle! And Eleanor is fun every time she tries to explain she's a ghost! Appreciate the comments and review. Have a great day!
Smiles and hugs, Carol