Haiku-dark tumbling through dark
Haiku39 total reviews
Comment from Mufasa
Nicely done. I've had the (pleasure?) of seeing a few of these when I lived in Oz/Kansas. They are as fascinating as they are deadly and mysterious.
Cheers!
M
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Nicely done. I've had the (pleasure?) of seeing a few of these when I lived in Oz/Kansas. They are as fascinating as they are deadly and mysterious.
Cheers!
M
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for the lovely review.
Melissa
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is an excellent Haiku! This is the first time I've seen the word "dervishing" applied to a tornado. Good choice! The picture you have fits your words well.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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This is an excellent Haiku! This is the first time I've seen the word "dervishing" applied to a tornado. Good choice! The picture you have fits your words well.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much for the wonderful review.
Melissa
Comment from Teri7
Melissa, This is a very well written haiku poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and great imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Melissa, This is a very well written haiku poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and great imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much Teri!!
Melissa
Comment from gansach
This is an excellent entry for the Haiku contest. You've given it a great presentation with your picture and the descriptive words that aptly depict the look and feel of a tornado. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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This is an excellent entry for the Haiku contest. You've given it a great presentation with your picture and the descriptive words that aptly depict the look and feel of a tornado. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review. It's so appreciated!
Melissa
Comment from Harry Craft
Again, I am not too versed on the Haiku format of poetry but I do like the message and meaning of this poem. I think it is cool you can write a powerful message with so few words. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Again, I am not too versed on the Haiku format of poetry but I do like the message and meaning of this poem. I think it is cool you can write a powerful message with so few words. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Harry, thanks so much for your wonderful review. It's so appreciated!
Melissa
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You are so welcome Melissa!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa.
This is a nicely done alliterative haiku about what a tornado is and where it comes from. It can also be metaphoric of how we feel in the midst of one of life's troubles.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Hi Melissa.
This is a nicely done alliterative haiku about what a tornado is and where it comes from. It can also be metaphoric of how we feel in the midst of one of life's troubles.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Hello there Joan! Thanks so much for your wonderful review. It's so appreciated!
Melissa
Comment from Wendy G
Very, very good. Powerful word choices, well suited to the dark image. I liked the alliteration and also the "deadened, leaden sky". I am sure this will do very well in the contest, and I send my best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Very, very good. Powerful word choices, well suited to the dark image. I liked the alliteration and also the "deadened, leaden sky". I am sure this will do very well in the contest, and I send my best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Hello Wendy. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. It's so appreciated!
Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Wow, what a powerful picture. Love it. I like some words you used like:dark tumbling through dark. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Wow, what a powerful picture. Love it. I like some words you used like:dark tumbling through dark. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Hello Brenda. I hope you are enjoying a great day! Thanks so much for your wonderful review. It's so appreciated!
Melissa
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wonderful alliteration in your Haiku, Melissa. I would hate to experience that storm, but I'm glad to read your words about it. Nicely done! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Wonderful alliteration in your Haiku, Melissa. I would hate to experience that storm, but I'm glad to read your words about it. Nicely done! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Good Morning Carol! I am delighted you liked the Haiku!! Thanks so much for your wonderful review. It's so appreciated! Hugs!
Melissa
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You're welcome. I hope your week ahead is blessed. Carol
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the haiku contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Excellent entry for the haiku contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Hello Gypsy! Thanks so much for your wonderful review. It's so appreciated!
Melissa