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Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet

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Miranda finds herself in another situation.

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Mitch sounds like a kind and caring guy and Miranda is luck to have met someone who cares so much about her and doesn't care what others think either. Another fine chapter as we learn more about these relationships, much enjoyed Gretchen, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you. Mitch is a good grounding force for her. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm glad of two things. First, Mitch understand Miranda and all her faults and love her anyway. Second, he's willing to be there for Waylon. Maybe he can smooth things over for Miranda. I do like this story.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you. Mitch will do his best. He seems to understand Miranda more than most. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Yes, it's usually the case that we can see everything going on and how things should be in everyone else's life. But most times, we can't seem to keep our own lives between the guardrails. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Happens a lot, doesn't it? Thank you for this fine review. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Ohhh, Maaaaan!! (Sorry; I don't mean to sound like Jane...) But this one breaks my heart. But, in all fairness, we all know what the road to Hell is paved with, right? Teens can be such ingrates.

Terrific chapter. I like that the neighbor's hearing is 20/20.
xoxox

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Waylon asked her not to say anything. She didn't listen. She has to learn. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
reply by Rachelle Allen on 26-Sep-2024
    Yes, you're right. I forgot about that part. That faux pas was all on her.
Comment from Sanku
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Miranda is a bit impetuous and she has to learn to contain herself at times. Mitch is a good counterbalance for her .I was surprised at Wzylon's anger .i thought he knew she was going to tlk to his teacher...

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Waylon knew she wanted to talk to Mr. Tomlin. He asked her not to. That's why he was angry. Yes, Mitch is very good for her. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
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A fine chapter. Miranda can't help herself - that's just the way she is, forthright and honest, not given to tact. That's why I like her. (And why Mitch loves her!) She says and does thing we would all like to be brave enough to say and do. But sometimes it backfires, and here, it looks like it has, because Waylon will be the one to bear the bullying from the "teacher". Looking forward to more.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    She may have over stepped with this one. Lol. Hopefully, Mitch can talk to Waylon and help ease the friction. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Waylon told her about him. Waylon knew how she would act. So why he he surprised that she did her saving her baby act? Both Mitchel and Waylon can get a grip. The teacher is at fault. Not Miranda. Good writing. Karen

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Waylon is upset because he asked her not to handle it. Plus, he's a teenager. Thank you for the great review. Gretchen
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 25-Sep-2024
    Miranda rules!!!!! :-)
Comment from BethShelby
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That is one thing Miranda and I wouldn't agree about. I always hated knowing my mom had been anywhere near one of my teachers. I avoided talking about my kids to their teachers for that reason. My best friend was like Miranda and she said she had it out with her kid's teachers because she said her mother didn't stand up for her. Miranda's personality makes it almost impossible to stay out of it. Mitch is good for her.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Miranda never checks the water before diving in. Lol. Thank you for this . Gretchen
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I'm coming in during the middle of something, but the story appears to be compelling. I generally skip over small font especially if the narrative is not double spaced, but I've read episodes of your collaboration with Rachelle, and enjoy your writing style. I'm going to give this story a try. It's compelling.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you. I'm still trying to figure out spacing. Lol. Will try to enlarge it. Glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
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The story is very well written and I am enjoying as I'm listening to it. May you have a wonderful evening and may God bless you and may you have a wonderful week. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much, Patricia. Gretchen