Love cannot take
A swap quatrain.16 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Ah, my friend,
You've chosen a great subject for your Swap Quatrain. The love of God. Free?? Sort of, worth it?? For certain. The love must be pure and it must be freely given. Such a message of hope and love.
Take care,
Rhonda
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Ah, my friend,
You've chosen a great subject for your Swap Quatrain. The love of God. Free?? Sort of, worth it?? For certain. The love must be pure and it must be freely given. Such a message of hope and love.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written poem about a very important subject, and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I have always been somewhat stressful of those who tried to buy love. I've had a couple in my life and want to try to buy my love and it's just not a pleasant thing to happen. Patricia.
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This is a very well written poem about a very important subject, and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I have always been somewhat stressful of those who tried to buy love. I've had a couple in my life and want to try to buy my love and it's just not a pleasant thing to happen. Patricia.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Roy,
This is a terrific swap quatrain about how much we are loved by the sacrifice on the cross. It gives us hope in the future.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
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Hi Roy,
This is a terrific swap quatrain about how much we are loved by the sacrifice on the cross. It gives us hope in the future.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice poem about the truth of the sacrificial and atoning love of Jesus. The fact is, we can't buy love, nor salvation. He gives it freely to us despite the personal cost to Himself.
Wendy
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Very nice poem about the truth of the sacrificial and atoning love of Jesus. The fact is, we can't buy love, nor salvation. He gives it freely to us despite the personal cost to Himself.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
Comment from Begin Again
There is no greater gift than to give of yourself and your love and to do it freely, without expecting something in return. Of course, we hope that we, too, are loved, but that is only guaranteed by the Lord.
Smiles, Carol
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There is no greater gift than to give of yourself and your love and to do it freely, without expecting something in return. Of course, we hope that we, too, are loved, but that is only guaranteed by the Lord.
Smiles, Carol
Happy Birthday!
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
Comment from Kahlani
Hi, Roy. I've come to recognize your poetry posts, not just from the presentation but also from the love that flows into your writing and through your words. This poem is no different. Can I ask you what kind of poem this is? The first and fourth lines in each stanza are the same but reversed.
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Hi, Roy. I've come to recognize your poetry posts, not just from the presentation but also from the love that flows into your writing and through your words. This poem is no different. Can I ask you what kind of poem this is? The first and fourth lines in each stanza are the same but reversed.
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2024